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Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in public spotlight.

Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in public spotlight. 2bxAj
Media plays a vital role in the career growth of public figures. Celebrities often prefer attention of media and try to portray themselves. Most of the people vehemently contend that renowned personalities do not have the voice to complain when the media interferes in their private matters. This is a debatable topic and the exact view point will be highlighted below. One cannot deny the fact that the famous personalities are also normal human beings with emotions and feelings. They also have issues or matters that they does not want to disclose with the society. According to there must be a limit for everything. Whenever it crosses the limit, celebrities have the right to raise the voice. For example, one of the famous superstar's wife had a miscarriage and thr family had opted not inform anyone but somehow the media got the information and it was leaked to the public. Later the actor tweeted in Twitter that there is no privacy for celebrities, and it is better not to become. On the otherhand, the counterparts argue that celebrities have no right to complain on media. According to them media attention influences the growth of celebrities. They think these public figures LA
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plays a vital role in the career growth of public figures.
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Celebrities
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often
prefer attention of
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media
and try to portray themselves. Most of the
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people
vehemently
contend that renowned personalities do not have the voice to complain when the
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media
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interferes
in their private matters. This is a debatable topic and the exact view point will
be highlighted
below.

One cannot deny the fact that the
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famous
personalities are
also
normal human beings with emotions and feelings. They
also
have issues or matters that they
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does
not want to disclose with the society. According to there
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must
be a limit for everything. Whenever it crosses the limit,
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celebrities
have the right to raise the voice.
For example
, one of the
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famous
superstar's wife had a miscarriage and
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family had opted not inform anyone
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somehow the
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media
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got
the information and it
was leaked
to the public. Later the actor tweeted
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in Twitter
that there is no privacy for
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celebrities
, and it is better not to become.

On the
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otherhand
, the counterparts argue that
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celebrities
have no right to complain on
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media
. According to them
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media
attention influences the growth of
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celebrities
. They
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think
these public
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IELTS essay Celebrities make a very good living out of media attention and have chosen to live in public spotlight.

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