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Okay I think it’s good at first

Okay I think it’s good at first mbOad
Princess Chulabhorn Science High School I love you too baby I am not sure what time I can go but I’m going back in the shower now I need a ride home from the store to pick it out I need a few more minutes for me and I’ll let you know if you want me any more money for your time to come home thank love love how love love miss love you too much and love how to the store is more Princess Chulabhorn Science High School I love you too baby I am not sure what time I can go but I’m going back in the shower now I need a ride home from the store to pick it out I need a few more minutes for me and I’ll let you know if you want me any more money for your time to come home thank love love how love love miss love you too much and love how to the store is more
Princess
Chulabhorn
Science High School I
love
you
too
baby I am not sure what
time
I can go
but
I’m going back in the shower
now
I
need
a ride home from the
store
to pick it out I
need
a few more minutes for me and I’ll
let
you know if you want me any more money for your
time
to
come
home thank
love
love
how
love
love
miss
love
you too much and
love
how to the
store
is more Princess
Chulabhorn
Science High School I
love
you
too
baby I am not sure what
time
I can go
but
I’m going back in the shower
now
I
need
a ride home from the
store
to pick it out I
need
a few more minutes for me and I’ll
let
you know if you want me any more money for your
time
to
come
home thank
love
love
how
love
love
miss
love
you too much and
love
how to the
store
is more
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IELTS essay Okay I think it’s good at first

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
167 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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