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Of the particular area from 1965 to the present day

Of the particular area from 1965 to the present day RwGAV

To begin with, during 1965, trees were grown towards North West but at present a car park is installed by chopping down trees and forests. The urban area on the left side of river still remain unchanged. While river which flow from South to West also same as during 1965, one bridge is constructed on it and for convenience of people a foot bridge also built on South side. Probing further, the number of houses on the north east side grew after 1965 and along with accommodation now area for parking cars is established. Towards South side the place beard since 1965 but currently the area is utilized for parking cars. The estimates shows that there would a car park toward South west corner in 2018. The area has became a developed area.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, during 1965, trees were grown
 towards North West This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at present a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park is installed
 by chopping down trees and forests. The urban You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of river still
 remain unchanged. While river which flow from South to West also
 same as during 1965, one bridge is constructed
 on it and for convenience of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 a foot bridge also
 built on South side.

Probing further
, the number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residences
houses
 on the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-eastnortheast
north east
 side grew after 1965 and along with accommodation This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 for parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
is established
. Towards South side the place beard since 1965 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
currently
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
is utilized
 for parking You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
. The estimates You should probably use "show".show
shows
 that there would a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 park toward South west corner in 2018. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 has Use past participle here: "become".become
became
 a developed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. 