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Newspapers used to carry real news but their main role today is to shock and entertain us. Write your composition in between 150 and 180 words

Newspapers used to carry real news but their main role today is to shock and entertain us. Write your composition in between 150 and 180 words QMMa1
I think it depends which newspapers you read. Some of them still report the news. Others don’t do it much. I think it’s important for any newspaper to report what had happened, but people like to read other things too. I think it’s good to expose scandal occasionally. Famous people are in the public eye and they cannot turn a blind eye to this. I don’t think it’s their main role, though. Their main role is to inform and this means writting reports on current news and events. I think television can do this too, but with a newspaper it’s not the same. You have time to read and think about it. That’s what I think.
I
think
it
depends
which newspapers you read.
Some
of them
still


report the news. Others don’t do it much. I
think
it’s
important
for any

newspaper to report what had happened,
but
people
like to read

other things too. I
think
it’s
good
to expose scandal
occasionally
.

Famous
people
are in the public
eye and
they cannot turn a blind

eye to this.

I don’t
think
it’s their main role, though. Their main role is to inform

and this means
writting
reports on
current
news and
events
. I
think


television can do this too,
but
with a newspaper it’s not the same.

You have time to read and
think
about it. That’s what I
think
.
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IELTS essay Newspapers used to carry real news but their main role today is to shock and entertain us. Write your composition in between 150 and 180 words

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
116 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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