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o see you in the near future

o see you in the near future 7PKXb
It’s good to get your letter. I decided to name it, the name is Immensely cute and it is the name of my puppy is Kiki. Kiki was given to me for my birthday, it was great gift from my brother. Since having Kiki, my life is Extremely happy, it is a docile and cute dog. Everyday I usually take it for a walk and feat it, I taught it how to catch the ball or picking up bone. I usually shower it on the weekend and take it to the doctor twice a month for a checkup. Glad to have received your letter, I see you are very busy studying for the exam and hope it will have goodresults. Hope to see you in the near future consequently we can play together with Kiki.
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IELTS essay o see you in the near future

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
135 words
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