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People are having toddler later in growth at an increasing rate.

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People are having toddler later in growth at an increasing rate. This essay is first aimed at pinpointing a number of causes of this issue and then will be examining how society and family growth are affected. To begin with, there are a number of various explanations to be taken into account as to why a number of individuals wish to have youth later in their growth. For one thing, needing financial stability might result in an increasing rate of having a toddler later. By and large, on the grounds that people wish to have abundance money to ensure a better growth for their infant, they focus on finding a stable income and job. For another, the fact that people wish to have abundance of time to gain more experiences in their growth deserves consideration. They have more opportunities to travel to numerous places, with the result that they discover their passion and understand their lives and themselves. There are several effects that are worth mentioning. On the one hand, granted that as health declines in mature age, adolescent may be born unhealthy. On the other hand, one obvious demerit is the generation gap that makes it extremely difficult to communicate with and relate to their toddler. Given the fact that parents need their adolescent to do what they want, and they do not understand what their infant think. Their infant will be put under pressure by demanding from parents. In conclusion, building a sound financial foundation and a great deal of time to gain more experience is among a number of possible rationales behind this trend. The effects mentioned above, including toddler possibly being born unhealthy and the generation gap, merit careful attention.
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. For one thing, needing financial stability might result in an increasing rate of having a
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later. By and large, on the grounds that
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people
wish to have abundance money to ensure a better
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growth
for their infant, they focus on finding a stable income and job. For another, the fact that
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people
wish to have abundance of time to gain more experiences in their
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of possible rationales behind this trend. The effects mentioned above, including
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IELTS essay People are having toddler later in growth at an increasing rate.

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