Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

It is frequently remarked that success is easy to attain but difficult to maintain .to what extent do you agree or diagree?

It is frequently remarked that success is easy to attain but difficult to maintain. eE1PG
Everyone human being desire to be success from his own perspective. success attain differently from person to person. Therefore, it is remarked that it is easy to be successful but difficult to maintain. I completely agree with this statement this need to be pondered upon in the proceeding paragraphs. According to my perspective hard work determination are require to attain success. For example, an employee who want to reach High ladder of his career do work hard post that achieve success, yet his Challenge start after that while doing his job with responsibility that even are much harder. Moreover, any singer or actor after one great song or performance become famous but his real restart after that as audience will look then them and expect to see more interesting in next time. Furthermore, the definition of success is changing over a time. A 10 year old child defines his success by gaining good grade in academic and employee defines his success by gaining great position. Attain success is easy to obtain while difficult to maintain Because real challenge start after gaining success while person taking responsibilities or making his promises fulfill due to the fact of his one blunder can ruin his career. In the epilogue, it is discerned that maintaining success is far more difficult rather than achieving it as it requires ambition, efforts, determination and continues excellent performance in every field and person have to take more responsibility is after being successful.
Everyone human being desire to be
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
from his
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
perspective.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
success
attain
differently
from
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
.
Therefore
, it
is remarked
that it is easy to be successful
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
difficult to maintain. I completely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this statement this need to
be pondered
upon in the proceeding paragraphs.

According to my perspective
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work determination are
Consider using a past participle here: "required".
require
Did you mean "attaining"? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
to attain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
.
For example
, an employee who want to reach High ladder of his career do work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
post that achieve
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
,
yet
his Challenge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
after that while doing his job with responsibility that even are much harder.
Moreover
, any singer or actor after one great song or performance become
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
his real restart after that as audience will look then them and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expect
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
more interesting in
next
time.

Furthermore
, the definition of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
is changing over a time. A 10 year
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
child defines his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
by gaining
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
grade in academic and employee defines his
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
by gaining great position. Attain
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
is easy to obtain while difficult to maintain
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
Because
real challenge
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
after gaining
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
while
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
taking responsibilities or making his promises fulfill due to the fact of his one blunder can ruin his career.

In the epilogue, it
is discerned
that maintaining
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
success
is far more difficult
rather
than achieving it as it requires ambition, efforts, determination and continues excellent performance in every field and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
take more responsibility is after being successful.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay It is frequently remarked that success is easy to attain but difficult to maintain.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
244 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 6band
    People are having toddler later in growth at an increasing rate.
    People are having toddler later in growth at an increasing rate. This essay is first aimed at pinpointing a number of causes of this issue and then will be examining how society and family growth are affected. To begin with, there are a number of various explanations to be taken into account as to ...
  • 5band
    In the modern world, others believe that kids who develop in less-money families can more easier adapt with real life than children who come from wealthy families
    In the modern world, others believe that kids who develop in less-money families can easier adapt to real-life than children who come from wealthy families. In my view, I strongly agree that teenagers from affluent families get better opportunities and are better prepared for future challenges. On ...
  • 6band
    People are having youngsters later in rising at an increasing rate
    People are having youngsters later in rising at an increasing rate. This essay is first aimed at pinpointing a sum of causes of this issue and then will be examining how society and family hikes are affected. To begin with, there is a statistic of various explanations to be taken into account as to...
  • 5band
    Many tourists visit places, do you think it is good aspects or bad aspects for people
    Nowadays myriad holidaymakers tend to explore remote destinations such as the Sahara and south pole where conditionals are dissimilar. There are advantages and disadvantages in this Advantages: Firstly, people see diverse sites where public have never been places. For example: The Everest peak, Sah...
  • 5band
    Images: 52157820 52157829 52157924 52157935 52157945
    Client Packshoot ApS Folder: 1000975465 Images: 52157820 52157829 52157924 52157935 52157945 Same issue with images 52057747 52057749 52057789 52057798 52057808 recently. I see that the Pixelz error of 'missing shadow' happened again on these new images under this template. This is the ongoing iss...
  • 5band
    The benefits of a good friendship
    Having a good friend is is one of the most beautiful things in one’s life. Firstly, you can have someone to share with. People are social creatures and need to communicate with each other. And who can be more suitable to talk to than a friend? Whether about your interests, your future plans or your ...





Get more results for topic:
  • It is frequently remarked that success is easy to attain but difficult to maintain .to what extent do you agree or diagree?