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Number and Types of Borrowed Books from Village Libraries

Number and Types of Borrowed Books from Village Libraries PRwRK
The data above shows the number and the types of borrowed books from four different village libraries. Recorded data from June to September illustrates that Sutton Wood library has fluctuative number of borrowed books. The total of borrowed books at Ryeslip Library was increase, meanwhile West Eaton and Church Mount was decrease. On the first month of the data, total books borrowed from Ryeslip Library was the highest, but on September the Sutton Wood Library replace it. The amount of borrowed books was fall in August with only 100 books borrowed below the amount at another three libraries. From all of the books that been borrowed, can be conclude that people are like to borrow five types of books. Those are self-help, fiction, history, science, and biography. Mostly people borrows fiction book with almost half of the total. The second one of the most favourite book is biography. Followed with science and history with same total percentage of 14%. Meanwhile, self-help is counted to be smallest amount of people's favourite book to borrow.
The data above
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the number and the types of
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borrowed
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books
from four
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different
village libraries.

Recorded data from June to September illustrates that Sutton Wood library has
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fluctuative
number of
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borrowed
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books
. The
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total
of
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borrowed
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books
at
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Ryeslip
Library was increase, meanwhile West Eaton and Church Mount was decrease. On the
first
month of the data,
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total
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books
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borrowed
from
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Ryeslip
Library was the highest,
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but
on September the Sutton Wood Library replace it. The amount of
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borrowed
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books
was fall in August with
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only
100
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books
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borrowed
below the amount at another three libraries.

From
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all of the
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books
that been
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borrowed
, can be
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conclude
that
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people
are like to borrow five types of
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books
. Those are self-
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help
, fiction, history, science, and biography.
Mostly
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people
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borrows
fiction
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book
with almost half of the
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total
. The second one of the most
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favourite
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book
is biography. Followed with science and history with same
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total
percentage of 14%. Meanwhile, self-
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help
is counted
to be
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smallest
amount of
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people
's
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favourite
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book
to borrow.
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IELTS essay Number and Types of Borrowed Books from Village Libraries

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
173 words
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