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Task 1: Describe a trend that you are interested in?

Task 1: Describe a trend that you are interested in? wOEXd
The trend is a “ Món ngon thân thương” on Tiktok. People will share the recipe and how to cook it the most delicious then they post them on Tiktok under hashtags “monngonthanthuong”. And we can find this trend with this hashtags. This trend connects people everywhere. They shared and commented on how to make these dishes. They together figured out the best recipe and the best ways to do it. This trend become popular because we love the food, change experience to look for better ways cook. I’m also used to be influenced by the trend. I cook after a recipe they tell me. After that I think this trend useful and interested.
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hashtags. This
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connects
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people
everywhere. They shared and commented on how to
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make
these dishes. They together figured out the best recipe and the best ways to do it. This
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become popular
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because
we
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love
the food,
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change
experience to look for better ways cook. I’m
also
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used
to
be influenced
by the
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. I cook after a recipe they
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tell
me. After that I
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useful and interested.

IELTS essay Task 1: Describe a trend that you are interested in?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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