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Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last year and it takes million of year to recover. What are the main cause of pollution.

Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last year and it takes million of year to recover. What are the main cause of pollution. dlJgE
Pollution is one of the major problem in these 21st century. Nowadays, environment suffer various pollution like -air, water, noiseand soil etc. Pollution too much damage our environment. Pollution of air, water, soil has become critical in the last year and it takes million of year to recover without pollution land. There are several cause of pollution. I will discuss my point of view in the next passage. To begin with, mostly people travel by the private vehicle they cause air pollution. Due to air pollution people suffer various problem like-covid-19 and many more prblm there are several things which cause air pollution like vehicle, cracker, and many more. Nowadays water and soil are also polluted. River and lakes polluted by the factory. Some people throw garbage here and there they are polluted our environment. People throw Polthines in the soil they also polluted the soil. Government should ban these plastic Polthines. Future generations face several kinds of problems about our environment.
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is one of the major problem in these 21st century. Nowadays,
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environment
suffer various
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pollution
like
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-air
, water,
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noiseand
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soil
etc.
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Pollution
too much damage our
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environment
.
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Pollution
of
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air
, water,
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soil
has become critical in the last year and it takes
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million
of year to recover without
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pollution
land. There are
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several cause
of
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pollution
. I will discuss my point of view in the
next
passage.

To
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with,
mostly
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people
travel by the private vehicle they cause
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air
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pollution
. Due to
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air
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pollution
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people
suffer various problem like-covid-19 and
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many
more
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prblm
there are several things which cause
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air
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pollution
like vehicle, cracker, and
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many
more. Nowadays water and
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soil
are
also
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polluted
. River and lakes
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polluted
by the factory.
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Some
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people
throw garbage here and there they are
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polluted
our
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environment
.
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People
throw
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Polthines
in the
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soil
they
also
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polluted
the
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soil
.
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Government
should ban these plastic
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Polthines
. Future generations face several kinds of problems about our
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environment
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IELTS essay Pollution of air, water and soil has become critical in last year and it takes million of year to recover. What are the main cause of pollution.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
162 words
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