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Nuclear power is a necessary evil. Despite the potential human and environmental consequences of radioactive fall out, nuclear energy is a genuine alternative to non-renewable energy source. Do you agree or disagree? v.2

Nuclear power is a necessary evil. Despite the potential human and environmental consequences of radioactive fall out, nuclear energy is a genuine alternative to non-renewable energy source. v. 2
In the present days, the internet is the fastest mode of communications available to mankind. Owing to this, it has become much easier to get all kinds of news. As a result, many people have started to think that it will result in the end of the age of newspapers and magazines. I completely disagree with the point and this essay will discuss the above mentioned points and give examples in support of my opinion in great details. Because of the fast growth rate of the internet, nowadays people are getting news very promptly. One of the main reasons, is the use of various social media like Facebook, Linkedin, Whatsapp through which news can be shared instantly among millions of people around the world. But the news shared by these media is not authentic and often misleading which can create chaos. It was observed in the past, that misleading information shared in social media caused some serious confusion among the citizens. On the contrary, the news published in magazines and newspaper is certainly more authentic than social media. In addition, older generation of people is not accustomed to the technology used today. As a result, they always prefer to read printed version of newspapers or magazines. A recent survey has shown that around ninety percent of older people are not comfortable with the latest technology, rather they get the latest news through traditional newspapers. To summarize, we can say that although availability of news has become much easier due to the internet, the traditional newspapers and magazines has its own flavours and values. So, I do not think a time will ever come where there is no newspaper. I believe they will always remain side by side with the alternate media.
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news
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many
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people
have
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started
to
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think
that it will result in the
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end
of the age of
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newspapers
and
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magazines
. I completely disagree with the point and this essay will discuss the above mentioned points and give examples in support of my opinion in great
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details
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Because
of the
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fast
growth rate of the internet, nowadays
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people
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news
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very
promptly
. One of the main reasons, is the
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use
of various social
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media
like Facebook,
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Linkedin
,
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Whatsapp
through which
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news
can
be shared
instantly
among millions of
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people
around the world.
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the
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shared by these
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is not authentic and
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often
misleading which can create chaos. It
was observed
in the past, that misleading information shared in social
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media
caused
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some
serious confusion among the citizens.
On the contrary
, the
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news
published in
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magazines
and
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newspaper
is
certainly
more authentic than social media.

In addition
, older generation of
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people
is not accustomed to the technology
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used
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today
.
As a result
, they always prefer to read printed version of
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newspapers
or
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magazines
. A recent survey has shown that around ninety percent of older
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people
are not comfortable with the latest technology,
rather
they
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get
the latest
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news
through traditional newspapers.

To summarize
, we can say that although availability of
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news
has become much easier due to the internet, the traditional
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newspapers
and
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magazines
has its
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own
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flavours
and values.
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, I do not
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think
a time will ever
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come
where there is no
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newspaper
. I believe they will always remain side by side with the alternate
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media
.
7.5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7.5Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7.5Mistakes

IELTS essay Nuclear power is a necessary evil. Despite the potential human and environmental consequences of radioactive fall out, nuclear energy is a genuine alternative to non-renewable energy source. v. 2

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
7.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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