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Nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand, agree or disagree?

There is a drastic change in each and every field due to rapid advancement in technology. In this technological world human need cheap and easy access for everything. Due to today’s situation I agree with nuclear energy is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Therefore, it is required to dig out all the true some facts before dwell into the topic. First of all, nuclear is the cheapest source of the energy in today’s world. In present time we all know fossil fuel is an alarming clock like coal, oil, gas. It is a sustainable energy source, mainly uses to produce electricity without any wastage, and do not harm to environment. Use of fossil fuel increase global warming. Nuclear energy need small amount of source than fossil fuel. On the other hand, the safety of nuclear power is a considerable question. In addition, nuclear power station need enormous space and working in this is very dangerous for working people. Moreover, around this power station no body want to live. There is a big threat of war because for safety made different weapons for war. Conclusion, every aspects have two sides. During to current situation nuclear energy is boon to this world.

There is a drastic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 in each and every field due to rapid advancement in technology. In this technological world human need This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :economical
cheap
 and easy access for everything. Due to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
’s situation I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 is a better choice for meeting increasing demand. Therefore
, it is required
 to dig out all the true This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 facts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 dwell into the topic.

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First of all
, nuclear is the cheapest source of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
’s world. In present time we all know fossil fuel is an alarming clock like coal, oil, gas. It is a sustainable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 source, mainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploits
uses
 to produce electricity without any wastage, and do not harm to environment. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
Use
 of fossil fuel increase global warming. Nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 need This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 amount of source than fossil fuel.

On the other hand
, the safety of nuclear power is a considerable question. In addition
, nuclear power station need enormous space and working in this is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 for working This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
. Moreover
, around this power station Did you mean "nobody"?nobody
no body
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
. There is a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
 threat of war This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 for safety made This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 weapons for war.

Conclusion, every The noun should be probably in the singular form: "aspect"?aspect
aspects
 have two sides. During to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 situation nuclear You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstrengthtoughnesspowervitalitystaminaefficiency
energy
 is boon to this world. 