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Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children.

It is controversial issue that reading stories from books is a good way instead of playing indoor games and activities. I am personally, agree with this statement. This essay will highlight the certainty is a rational approach that needs to be opinion. Discussing the first view, the most intrinsic one Is that moral values. To justify, with a doubt, reading trail books is one of the best source of entertainment. Though owing to the fact that which play an imperative role because with the help of those books adolescents mind is creative and there cognitive skills are improved. Moreover, they learn moral and positive thoughts.
It is controversial issue that reading stories from books is a
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good
way
instead
of playing indoor games and activities. I am
personally
,
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agree
with this statement. This essay will highlight the certainty is a rational approach that needs to be opinion.

Discussing the
first
view, the most intrinsic one Is that moral values. To justify, with a doubt, reading trail books is one of the best source of entertainment. Though owing to the fact that which play an imperative role
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because
with the
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help
of those books adolescents mind is creative and there cognitive
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skills
are
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improved
.
Moreover
, they learn moral and
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positive
thoughts.

IELTS essay Some people believe that reading stories from a book is better than watching tv or playing computer games for children.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
105 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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