Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Nowdays some people believe advertising is useful and informative Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods What is your opinion

Nowdays some people believe advertising is useful and informative Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods What is your opinion 3aWpw
Nowadays, advertising is deemed instructive by some people, while others claim that advertising provides incorrect information about the goods and the price of products is increased. I comprehensively with this assertion because advertising tempts people and manipulates consumers. Advertising can be regarded disadvantageous for the following reasons. To begin with, advertisements can create a trend that tempts people to purchase products unnecessarily. In other words, advertising has tempted people to buy their products by introducing state-of-the-art functions through their compelling advertisements. For example, every year, Apple releases a new smartphone through several eye-catching advertisements, which affect minds of consumers, and queues can be seen in front of most apple's stores to buy the latest model, even they already have a functional mobile phone. Thus, the advertisements certainly encourage people to buy products which are not the real needs and advertising industry want us to stay fashionable and follow the latest trends. Another point to consider is that advertising industry has manipulated consumers with subliminal advertisements. To be more specific, nowadays, buyers are not aware of high frequency of advertisements, which impact on consumers' mind. According to a study, subliminal advertisements can certainly make us become familiar with a product, which leads us to consideration that we need it. It seems that people are not aware of subliminal advertising, which makes us buy products subconsciously, even the products are not good for health. In conclusion, this essay affirms that advertising can tempt people to buy unnecessary goods and it can manipulate people to purchase products through subconscious advertisements.
Nowadays, advertising
is deemed
instructive by
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
, while others claim that advertising provides incorrect information about the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
and the price of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
is increased
. I
comprehensively
with this assertion
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
advertising tempts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
and manipulates consumers.

Advertising can
be regarded
disadvantageous for the following reasons. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
with,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
can create a trend that tempts
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
unnecessarily
.
In other words
, advertising has tempted
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
their
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
by introducing state-of-the-art functions through their compelling
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
.
For example
, every year, Apple releases a new smartphone through several eye-catching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
, which affect minds of consumers, and queues can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
in front of most
Did you mean the proper noun "Apple" (= technology company)?
apple
's stores to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
the latest model, even they already have a functional mobile phone.
Thus
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
certainly
encourage
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
which are not the real needs and advertising industry want us to stay fashionable and follow the latest trends.

Another point to consider is that advertising industry has manipulated consumers with subliminal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
. To be more specific, nowadays, buyers are not aware of high frequency of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
, which impact on consumers' mind. According to a study, subliminal
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
can
certainly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
us become familiar with a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
product
, which leads us to consideration that we need it. It seems that
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
are not aware of subliminal advertising, which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
us
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
subconsciously
, even the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
are not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
for health.

In conclusion
, this essay affirms that advertising can tempt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
buy
unnecessary
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
goods
and it can manipulate
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
people
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
through subconscious
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
advertisements
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Nowdays some people believe advertising is useful and informative Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods What is your opinion

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • Nowdays some people believe advertising is useful and informative Others believe advertising gives false information about the products and increase the price of goods What is your opinion