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Nowdays many people want to buy famous brand of cloths car and other items what are the reaso for this ?

Nowdays many people want to buy famous brand of cloths car and other items what are the reaso for this? eA1M7
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gather them
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change
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Pust
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-
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because
technology,
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memy
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ده
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مو
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other Civilians wen to of cloths
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items
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think
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Positive
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devlopment
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is


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people
to
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buy
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branded
cloths, car and
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othe
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items
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because
trend. In
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this life style new
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festes
life Style wanted
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brended
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item
s his
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freinds
have a
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branded
=r,
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footwar
and other
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items
.
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econd
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ems 40%
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items
provide
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quility
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chich
long time
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use
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Cheap
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quilit


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ople
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one
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itom and
we 4
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time's
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cloths.
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mun
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es
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oms and
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Can
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it
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thes
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IELTS essay Nowdays many people want to buy famous brand of cloths car and other items what are the reaso for this?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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