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nowdays families are not as close as they used to be.What do you think are the causes of this?

nowdays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this? RR5MG
almost everyone knows that the family and relationships in it play a quite role in our lives. at this moment the members of families became further of each other. the causes of this can be different. nowadays in the century of developing technologies and general hurry the huge number of people spend a lot of time of doing their job and in the virtual world living own families by the side. Moreover, people in families do not stop to speak with th
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family
and relationships in it play a
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in our
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lives
.
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at
this moment the members of
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families
became
further
of each other.
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the
causes of this can be
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different
.
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nowadays
in the century of developing technologies and general hurry the huge number of
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people
spend
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a lot of
time of doing their job and in the virtual world living
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own
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families
by the side.
Moreover
,
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people
in
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families
do not
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stop
to speak with
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IELTS essay nowdays families are not as close as they used to be. What do you think are the causes of this?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
81 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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