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Nowadays we are producing more and more waste. What are the causes and solutions?

Nowadays we are producing more and more waste. What are the causes and solutions? pKad9
In recent years, the factories have enlarged, so the rate of production and waste is influx. There are many aspects and better solutions for this, I will note these features n my essay. In fact, in industrialised nations, there are various products that can lead to waste more. Firstly, the influence of technology on human needs is considerable. For instance, there are more products than we need, that is why this can lead to waste things more. Secondly, there are number of things which are very cheap, so people do not realize the value of them and then they try to just throw them into trashes. Finally, if people continue in this way, in future this will make more air pollution, water pollution or global warming. To imitate these issues, the governments should follow these steps. Initially, they should take a balance between products and populations in order to reduce the waste. Additionally, they can recycle things more and stop the new producing methods. Another way to is to force people to buy things that are enough for them, even though they are rich. To do that, authorities should make products more expensive to rich families, and that can help to limit the waste. Ultimately, things should be valuable for all, and people should take a consideration of their will, and to not waste it. In conclusion, governments and citizens should collaborate with each others to reduce the amount of waste. I believe, if things are more valuable, then they will be more useful and not wasteful.
In recent years, the factories have enlarged,
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so
the rate of production and
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waste
is influx. There are
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many
aspects and better solutions for this, I will note these features n my essay.

In fact, in
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industrialised
nations, there are various
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products
that can lead to
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waste
more.
Firstly
, the influence of technology on human needs is considerable.
For instance
, there are more
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products
than we need,
that is
why this can lead to
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waste
things more.
Secondly
, there are number of things which are
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very
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cheap
,
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so
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people
do not realize the value of
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them and
then they try to
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just
throw them into trashes.
Finally
, if
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people
continue in this way, in future this will
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make
more air pollution, water pollution or global warming.

To imitate these issues, the
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governments
should follow these steps.
Initially
, they should take a balance between
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products
and populations in order to
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reduce
the
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waste
.
Additionally
, they can recycle things more and
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stop
the new producing methods. Another way to is to force
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people
to
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buy
things that are
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enough
for them,
even though
they are rich. To do that, authorities should
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
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products
more expensive to rich families, and that can
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help
to limit the
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waste
.
Ultimately
, things should be valuable for all, and
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people
should take a consideration of their will, and to not
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waste
it.

In conclusion
,
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governments
and citizens should collaborate with each
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others
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduce
the amount of
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waste
. I believe, if things are more valuable, then they will be more useful and not wasteful.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more waste. What are the causes and solutions?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
257 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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