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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? lgXw
Keeping the environment clean is desirable for both mental and physical health. While the throwing away culture in the contemporary and high repair cost on technological items than ever before is producing more rubbish. This essay will discuss two main reasons behind the increasing dirtiness in the surroundings and two possible solutions to curb the problem at hand. With the advent of technology and increase in purchasing power, it is common that people follow the modern throw-away culture in addition to the traditional food wasting. This is due to the high repair costs, data privacy, and long waiting time for the repair of an item, people prefer to buy a new product instead and dispose of the old one. For the small problems in iPad, for instance, people prefer to buy a new one rather than repair the current item due to the high data privacy risk associated. Hence, this contributes in a cathode manner to create more useless products. Educating people about the adverse effect it has on society can help to reduce the mess. The Government ought to start programs which create awareness in people to follow strict rules about disposing of waste products such as launching a Television show. It is also the responsibility of both the individual and organizations who make the products to consider the irreversible effects on the natural ecosystem. Apple, for instance, started an initiative of producing one hundred percent recyclable products by the end of 2024. Also, the state should impose heavy fines to make sure people follow the rules. In conclusion, for the betterment of both mental and physical health alongside keeping the beauty of the society, it is ideal to educate people about the adverse effects and impose strict fines to compel them to follow the rules.
Keeping the environment clean is desirable for both mental and physical health. While the throwing away culture in the contemporary and high
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repair
cost on technological items than ever
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before
is producing more rubbish. This essay will discuss two main reasons behind the increasing dirtiness in the surroundings and two possible solutions to curb the problem at hand.

With the advent of technology and increase in purchasing power, it is common that
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people
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follow
the modern throw-away culture
in addition
to the traditional food wasting. This is due to the high
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repair
costs, data privacy, and long waiting time for the
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repair
of an item,
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people
prefer to
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buy
a new
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product
instead
and dispose of the
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old
one. For the
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small
problems in iPad,
for instance
,
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people
prefer to
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buy
a new one
rather
than
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repair
the
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current
item due to the high data privacy
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risk
associated.
Hence
, this contributes in a cathode manner to create more useless products.

Educating
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people
about the adverse effect it has on society can
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help
to
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reduce
the mess. The
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Government
ought to
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start
programs which create awareness in
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people
to
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follow
strict
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rules
about disposing of waste
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products
such as launching a Television
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show
. It is
also
the responsibility of both the individual and organizations who
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make
the
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products
to consider the irreversible effects on the natural ecosystem. Apple,
for instance
,
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started
an initiative of producing one hundred percent recyclable
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products
by the
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end
of 2024.
Also
, the state should impose heavy fines to
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make
sure
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people
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follow
the
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rules
.

In conclusion
, for the betterment of both mental and physical health alongside keeping the beauty of the society, it is ideal to educate
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people
about the adverse effects and impose strict fines to compel them to
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follow
the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rules
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
297 words
6.5
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