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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening ? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produce?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produce? VVBD
Environment and its preservation is the burning topic which in turn is undoubtedly a need of an hour. In this modern era, humans are responsible for generating excessive garbage. Therefore, this essay will present the causes of environmental pollution and suggests mandatory remedies that should implement by the authorities as corrective measures in the upcoming paragraphs. To begin with, in developing countries, population has been increasing from the olden times and there is not enough land available for dispose the waste material. In other words, unavailability of adequate dumping land is the root cause of environmental pollution. Moreover, in rural areas, people are not much educated in order to recycle waste or segregate the rubbish in two terms such as biodegradable and non-biodegradable respectively. In addition, due to the proliferation in industrialization, land is becoming less fertile. Also it has ample of negative effects on individuals who live in slump areas. To exemplify, according to the national survey, 70% of land has been deteriorating owing to throwing garbage on road, yields to increasing health diseases among people like breathing problems, skin cancer etcetera. On the other hand, there are different ways to tackle the problem of environmental pollution. Firstly, government should aware to community about the process of decomposition of rubbish as per its category such as e-waste, wet and dry waste. Additionally, they should make campaign to cognizance the society about 3R's like reduce, reuse and recycle so that people can distribute waste in those terms and they can reuse the dry rubbish such as plastic material in an attractive way. Although, this is not only the duty of government, yet individuals should have to show some responsibility among nation and they should create some youth clubs to aware public about reuse waste. To recapitulate, government should work on dispose the rubbish and impose new rules to protect the environment. They should charge fine in the form of punishment, if one will throw waste on road. Hence, individuals should support authorities to make environment healthy.
Environment and its preservation is the burning topic which in turn is
undoubtedly
a need of an hour. In this modern era, humans are responsible for generating excessive garbage.
Therefore
, this essay will present the causes of environmental pollution and suggests mandatory remedies that should implement by the authorities as corrective measures in the upcoming paragraphs. To
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begin
with, in
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developing countries
, population has been increasing from the olden times and there is not
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enough
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land
available for dispose the
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waste
material.
In other words
, unavailability of adequate dumping
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land
is the root cause of environmental pollution.
Moreover
, in rural areas,
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people
are not much educated in order to recycle
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waste
or segregate the
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rubbish
in two terms such as biodegradable and non-biodegradable
respectively
.
In addition
, due to the proliferation in industrialization,
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land
is becoming less fertile.
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Also
it has ample of
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negative
effects on individuals who
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live
in slump areas. To exemplify, according to the national survey, 70% of
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land
has been deteriorating owing to throwing garbage on road, yields to increasing health diseases among
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people
like breathing problems, skin cancer etcetera.
On the other hand
, there are
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different
ways to tackle the problem of environmental pollution.
Firstly
,
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government
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should aware
to community about the process of decomposition of
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rubbish
as per its category such as e-waste, wet and dry
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
.
Additionally
, they should
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make
campaign to cognizance the society about 3R's like
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reduce
, reuse and recycle
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so
that
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people
can distribute
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waste
in those
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terms and
they can reuse the dry
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rubbish
such as plastic material
Consider replacing "in an attractive way" with the adverb for "attractive"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an attractive way
. Although, this is not
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only
the duty of
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government
,
yet
individuals should
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have to
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show
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some
responsibility among
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nation and
they should create
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some
youth clubs to aware public about reuse
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waste
. To recapitulate,
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government
should work on dispose the
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rubbish
and impose new
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rules
to protect the environment. They should charge fine in the form of punishment, if one will throw
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
waste
on road.
Hence
, individuals should support authorities to
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make
environment healthy.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produce?

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