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Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion xwm1
now a day, there are number of programs and products which is beneficially to solve the illegal activity do by criminal. Some people think that photo's and video provide enough evidence to court. I shall discuss both negative and positive view in looming paragraph. First and foremost, there are many products in market like C. C. T. V. camera, voice recorders, motion sensor security alarms and many more which deal with illegal activity. These types of products useful to recognise the face of criminal and way he or she did crime. Moreover, in modern era many cases are solved by the help of video and photographs evidence.
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a day, there are number of programs and products which is
beneficially
to solve the illegal activity do by criminal.
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people
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that photo's and video provide
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enough
evidence to court. I shall discuss both
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negative
and
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view in looming paragraph.

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and foremost, there are
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many
products in market like C. C. T. V. camera, voice recorders, motion sensor security alarms and
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many
more which deal with illegal activity. These types of products useful to
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recognise
the face of criminal and way he or she did crime.
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, in modern era
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many
cases
are solved
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of video and photographs evidence.

IELTS essay Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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107 words
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