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Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion 5n6e
now a day, there are number of programs and products which is beneficially to solve the illegal activity do by criminal. Some people think that photo's and video provide enough evidence to court. I shall discuss both negative and positive view in looming paragraph. First and foremost, there are many products in market like C. C. T. V. camera, voice recorders, motion sensor security alarms and many more which deal with illegal activity. These types of products useful to recognise the face of criminal and way he or she did crime. Moreover, in modern era many cases are solved by the help of video and photographs evidence. On the other hand, due to advancement of technology every people have skill on tips. They now how to edit and make duplicate evidence according to their situations. Futhermore, optical products ease the crimes for criminal. Criminal use technology and other products to make easy for their criminal activities. For example, recently Pakistan terrorist supply weapon by camera and drones. Besides this, some people use this technology to supply the drugs from one country to different country. Moreover, many crimes have no evidence like video or photograph in the modern world because such crimes are did the help of Government, leaders, political parties, crime branch and other businessmen Last but not least, i think video and pictures are not enough for court to solve the case because this types of things are easily create by computer softwares
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a day, there are number of programs and
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to solve the illegal activity do by
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criminal
.
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that photo's and
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video
provide
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enough
evidence to court. I shall discuss both
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and
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view in looming paragraph.

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and foremost, there are
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products
in market like C. C. T. V. camera, voice recorders, motion sensor security alarms and
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many
more which deal with illegal activity. These types of
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products
useful to
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recognise
the face of
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criminal
and way he or she did
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crime
.
Moreover
, in modern era
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many
cases
are solved
by the
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help
of
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video
and photographs evidence.

On the other hand
, due to advancement of technology every
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people
have
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skill
on tips. They
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now
how to edit and
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make
duplicate evidence according to their situations.
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Futhermore
, optical
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products
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ease
the
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crimes
for
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criminal
.
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use
technology and other
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products
to
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make
easy for their
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criminal
activities.
For example
, recently Pakistan terrorist supply weapon by camera and drones.
Besides
this,
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some
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people
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use
this technology to supply the drugs from one country to
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different
country.
Moreover
,
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many
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crimes
have no evidence like
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video
or photograph in the modern world
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because
such
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crimes
are
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the
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help
of
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Government
, leaders, political parties,
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crime
branch and other businessmen

Last
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not least,
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video
and pictures are not
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enough
for court to solve the case
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because
this types of things are
easily
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create
by computer
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softwares
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IELTS essay Some people believe that visual images (such as photos and videos) provide enough evidence that a crime was committed. Others think that they are not enough on their own and other evidence is needed. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Essay
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243 words
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