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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Oo13
Nowadays, people are producing more rubbish as compare to the past. It was always a debatable issue, which now become more controversial. The substantial influence of making rubbish has now sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. This essay will discuss the reasons of producing more and more garbage and few steps that government can take to overcome this issue. At the outset, there are numerous reasons why people are creating more rubbish but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that these days, all most every product is manufactured by big industries, which then goes to the wholesaler, retailers and then to the customers. Therefore, a product comes in small packaging and a product is for single use. Consequently, a buyer purchase small packet and then dispose it which results in producing more rubbish. As an illustration, buyer purchases tissue box and use it once and throw it. Whereas, in past individuals used to use handkerchief. Moreover, because industrialists makes a product in huge quantity, thus their cost lessen, as a consequence they sell products in an affordable prices, and because of it consumers hesitate of reusing the product. This troublesome situation can be better handled by government. Firstly, Government should strictly put some strict rules for companies to follow. For example, companies should not use disposable material for packaging instead they should use material that can be recycled and can be used again. For example, plastic bottles and bags, cans of drinks etc. Secondly, Government should impose fines on companies to manufacture a products that cannot be recycled. Lastly, consumers should also be fined if they do not send products to recycle and throw it. To sum up everything that has been stated so far, people are making more rubbish than before but with the help of government this issue can be abate.
Nowadays,
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people
are producing more
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rubbish
as compare to the past. It was always a debatable issue, which
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now
become more controversial. The substantial influence of making
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rubbish
has
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now
sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend. This essay will discuss the reasons of producing more and more garbage and few steps that
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government
can take to overcome this issue.

At the outset, there are numerous reasons why
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people
are creating more
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rubbish
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but
the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that these days, all
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most every
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product
is manufactured
by
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big
industries, which then goes to the wholesaler, retailers and then to the customers.
Therefore
, a
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product
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comes
in
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small
packaging and a
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product
is for single
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use
.
Consequently
, a buyer
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purchase
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small
packet and then dispose it which results in producing more
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rubbish
. As an illustration, buyer
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purchases
tissue box and
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use
it once and throw it.
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, in past individuals
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to
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use
handkerchief.
Moreover
,
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because
industrialists
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makes
a
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product
in huge quantity,
thus
their cost lessen, as a consequence they sell
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products
in an affordable
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prices
, and
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because
of
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it consumers
hesitate of reusing the product.

This troublesome situation can be better handled by
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government
.
Firstly
,
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Government
should
strictly
put
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strict
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rules
for
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companies
to follow.
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,
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companies
should not
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use
disposable material for packaging
instead
they should
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use
material that can
be recycled
and can be
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used
again.
For example
, plastic bottles and bags, cans of drinks etc.
Secondly
,
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Government
should impose fines on
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companies
to manufacture a
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products
that cannot
be recycled
.
Lastly
, consumers should
also
be fined
if they do not
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send
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products
to recycle and throw it.

To sum up everything that has
been stated
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so
far,
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people
are making more
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rubbish
than
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before
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but
with the
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help
of
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government
this issue can be
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abate
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
309 words
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