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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 2GNo
The economy is developing at huge pace also posses a number of detrimental effect in various territory from which one is rubbish (garbage). This eassy will figure out causes for such criteria and solution, thereby arrive at conclusion. Adimttedly, trash increasing day by day in a number of countries houses various driving forces. Primarily consumerism translates to a main prospect of such practice, as many people buy some products by exorbitant packaging, but which are not properly utilize by the consumer appropriately. Moreover, increasing population also lead to the same factor, as demand has rising for materials, whether it is eatable or for other uses are marketing without the actual use. To salve such catastrophic affect, government encat some measures to overcome this issue. The awarness campus practiced by organization translates the knowledge about such wastage, as people get to now that what it can cause? . Mareover re-use and recycling self materials can benifit in a large ratio. In conclusion, the potential candidate and the collaboration of government together make possible to solve such effects. The Individual are not capable of doing that by individually
The economy is developing at huge pace
also
posses a number of detrimental effect in various territory from which one is rubbish (garbage). This
eassy
will figure out causes for such criteria and solution, thereby arrive at conclusion.

Adimttedly
, trash increasing day by day in a number of countries
houses
various driving forces.
Primarily
consumerism translates to a main prospect of such practice, as
many
people
buy
some
products by exorbitant packaging,
but
which are not
properly
utilize by the consumer
appropriately
.
Moreover
, increasing population
also
lead to the same factor, as demand has rising for materials, whether it is eatable or for other
uses
are marketing without the actual
use
.

To salve such catastrophic affect,
government
encat
some
measures to overcome this issue. The
awarness
campus practiced by organization translates the knowledge about such wastage, as
people
get
to
now
that what it can cause?
.
Mareover
re-
use
and recycling self materials can
benifit
in a large ratio.

In conclusion
, the potential candidate and the collaboration of
government
together
make
possible to solve such effects. The Individual are not capable of doing that by
individually
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IELTS essay Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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