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Write about the following topic: Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As we are heading towards a modernized culture, we tend to possess more and more goods those are good to show off rather than helping us. These items are good to see but are useless and hence becomes a part of dirt when it looses its lusture. In this essay we will discuss the reasons for production of rubbish and government initiatives that will help us to reduce it. Firstly, with the increase in per capita income of families, people are inclined towards purchasing articles that suits the ambiance of home. For example, for storage home makers prefer buying plastic boxes which after a while, looses its shine and is no longer attractive to watch. This leads the storages boxes to dustbins. These plastics take over 99 years to disintegrate into soils, polluting the lands. Secondly, the debris gathered from the reconstruction or sites, roads, etc. Nowaday, it's fashion to renovate the buildings and roads every second year. These constructions indulge in heavy amount of waste production which is used as a landfill at many places. Thus, degrading the land value. For example, the road maintenance body scrapes the roads every March to rebuild the roads and these scraps are used to fill the nearby low lands. The governing bodies can take various measures to decrease this large amount of byproducts by inculcating few rules. It can levy taxes on purchase of non degradable plastics, which will ensure that the public is consuming right type of products. Aditionally, it can charge heafty amount on reconstruction of sites before 5 years of its erection. To conclude, we should try to reduce production of filth around us to create a better environment for today and tomorrow. The ruling bodies can equally contribute in framing a better life for all the residents.
As we are heading towards a modernized culture, we tend to possess more and more
goods
those are
good
to
show
off
rather
than helping us. These items are
good
to
see
but
are useless and
hence
becomes a part of dirt when it looses its
lusture
. In this essay we will discuss the reasons for production of rubbish and
government
initiatives that will
help
us to
reduce
it.

Firstly
, with the increase in per capita income of families,
people
are inclined
towards purchasing articles that suits the ambiance of home.
For example
, for storage
home makers
prefer buying plastic boxes which after a while, looses its shine and is no longer attractive to
watch
. This leads the
storages
boxes to dustbins. These plastics take over 99 years to disintegrate into soils, polluting the lands.

Secondly
, the debris gathered from the reconstruction or sites,
roads
, etc.
Nowaday
, it's fashion to renovate the buildings and
roads
every second year. These constructions indulge in heavy amount of waste production which is
used
as a landfill at
many
places.
Thus
, degrading the land value.
For example
, the
road
maintenance body scrapes the
roads
every March to rebuild the
roads
and these scraps are
used
to fill the nearby low lands.

The governing bodies can take various measures to decrease this large amount of byproducts by inculcating few
rules
. It can levy taxes on
purchase
of
non degradable
plastics, which will ensure that the public is consuming right type of products.
Aditionally
, it can charge
heafty
amount on reconstruction of sites
before
5 years of its erection.

To conclude
, we should try to
reduce
production of filth around us to create a better environment for
today
and tomorrow. The ruling bodies can
equally
contribute in framing a better life for all the residents.
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IELTS essay : Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

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  American English
5 paragraphs
299 words
6.0
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