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NOWADAYS WE ARE LIVING IN THORW-AWAY SOCIETY.WAHT ARE THE REASONS AND HOW IT EFFECTS .

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It is indeed true that as of now we are living in the community where people would throw their their old items more often. If pondered, I believe that there are many reasons for such a trend; however, this leads a detrimental impact on all over the world. In the up-coming paragraphs both the aspects would be explicated further. Many causes can be attributed for this situation. The foremost one is that, consumers goods are more available in reasonable price. By this I mean that, in this technological world any items made conveniently and in a large quantity. Also by this cost of labor is also reduced therefore overall price of it plummeted drastically. As result more people purchase new things because they are more affordable to have it instead of repairing it. Moreover, style of living has been change dramatically. In other words, because of the globalized as well as materialistic world people have more options when it comes to shopping they so they always dumps items which they have bought past life and purchase new ones instead of repairing it. on the other hand this have a negative impact. To begin with, this has more adverse affect on the environment. To elaborate, if some one dumping their purchased stuff often so land pollution might be soared significantly also this trend can put more pressure on manufacturing industry in order to produce more proportion of the goods consequently more toxic gases emitted by the mills and air pollution will elevate. To sum up it can be eventually commented that although now we live in throw-away society. Due to cheaper price of the items and life style of people has changed. But by this air as well as land pollution may increased
It is
indeed
true that as of
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now
we are living in the community where
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people
would throw
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their their
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old
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items
more
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often
. If pondered, I believe that there are
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many
reasons for such a trend;
however
, this leads a detrimental impact on all over the world. In the up-coming paragraphs both the aspects would
be explicated
further
.

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Many
causes can
be attributed
for this situation. The foremost one is that, consumers
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goods
are more available in reasonable price. By this I mean that, in this technological world any
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items
made
conveniently
and in a large quantity.
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Also
by this cost of labor is
also
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reduced
therefore
overall
price of it plummeted
drastically
. As result more
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people
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purchase
new things
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because
they are more affordable to have it
instead
of repairing it.
Moreover
, style of living has been
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change
dramatically
.
In other words
,
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because
of the globalized
as well
as materialistic world
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people
have more options when it
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comes
to shopping they
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so
they always
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dumps
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items
which they have
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bought
past life and
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purchase
new ones
instead
of repairing it.

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on
the other hand
The verb 'have' is plural. Did you mean: "this has"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?
this have
a
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negative
impact. To
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begin
with, this has more adverse
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affect
on the environment. To elaborate, if
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some one
dumping their
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purchased
stuff
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often
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so
land pollution might
be soared
significantly
also
this trend can put more pressure on manufacturing industry in order to produce more proportion of the
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goods
consequently
more toxic gases emitted by the mills and air pollution will elevate.

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To
sum up it can be
eventually
commented that although
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now
we
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live
in throw-away society. Due to cheaper price of the
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items
and life style of
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people
has
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changed
.
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But
by this air
as well
as land pollution may
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increased
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IELTS essay NOWADAYS WE ARE LIVING IN THORW-AWAY SOCIETY. WAHT ARE THE REASONS AND HOW IT EFFECTS.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
291 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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