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Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages? yKpr
Nowadays, the people borrow money very easily and almost all Civilians have a credit card therefore people buy car from that credit. I explain both the side of this idea this is good or risky and give my opinion in following paragraphs. To Start with, there are many reasons that support this statement is good. First and foremost people can buy that thing without sufficient case. They can gives money from monthly installment therefore, they do not require full money at the buying time. It’s hard to add new facility in the house without case. For example, last week one of my friend buys car with helps of credit now they give them money back from his salary. Moreover there are values disadvantage for this idea. Firstly, there is one to weeks because people buy something on credit and damn income source is only job and if they’ve left their job they unable to pay the amount of that thing. Secondly people buy more than dick on for them it’s hard to pay back. In my opinion, buy from the credit is a good idea but if we did not access properly it’s handful for us. To conclude, all the statement have a two side positive and negative, this idea is a positive because it give us something without case and negative is have risk.
Nowadays, the
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people
borrow
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money
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very
easily
and almost all Civilians have a
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credit
card
therefore
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people
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buy
car from that
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credit
. I
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explain
both the side of this
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idea
this is
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good
or risky and
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give
my opinion in following paragraphs.

To
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with, there are
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many
reasons that support this statement is
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good
.
First
and foremost
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people
can
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buy
that thing without sufficient case. They can
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gives
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money
from monthly installment
therefore
, they do not require full
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money
at the buying time. It’s
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hard
to
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add
new facility in the
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house
without case.
For example
, last week one of my friend
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buys
car with
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helps
of
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credit
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now
they
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give
them
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money
back from his salary.

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Moreover
there are values disadvantage for this
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idea
.
Firstly
, there is one to weeks
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because
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people
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buy
something on
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credit
and damn income source is
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only
job and if they’ve
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left
their job
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they
unable to pay the amount of that thing.
Secondly
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people
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buy
more than dick on for them it’s
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hard
to pay back.

In my opinion,
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buy
from the
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credit
is a
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good
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idea
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but
if we did not access
properly
it’s handful for us.

To conclude
, all the statement have a two side
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positive
and
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negative
, this
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idea
is a
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positive
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because
it
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give
us something without case and
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negative
is have
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risk
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays it is easy to apply for and be given a credit card. However, some people experience problems when they are not be able to pay their debts back. In your opinion, do the advantages of credit cards outweigh the disadvantages?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
225 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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