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Introduce yourself briefly (e.g: your strengths, weaknesses, etc.)

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My name is Phó Hoàng Ngọc Nhi, and I'm a freshman. I consider myself a person who can work well under pressure, and I've never missed a deadline. One specific example that comes to mind is when I was asked to complete a task that my teammate forgot about. My leader didn’t realize this until two hours before the deadline. It was an important piece, so I got to work, and with feverish precision, I was able to complete the article. Not only was it finished on time, but it was received very well by my classmates. My weakness is that I tend to be overly critical of myself. Whenever I complete a project, I can’t help but feel that I could have done more even if my work received a positive response.
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, and I'm a freshman. I consider myself a person who can work well under pressure, and I've never missed a deadline. One specific example that
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was it finished on time,
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was received
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well by my classmates. My weakness is that I tend to be
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IELTS essay Introduce yourself briefly (e. g: your strengths, weaknesses, etc. )

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
133 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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