Many people believe that consumption of alcohol leads to many problems and as a result many states have ban on alcohol. Up to certain extent I agree with above statement but still government should allow it in certain limit as it also has some advantages too.
First of all, alcohol helps to improve digestive system and doctors often suggest it if person is suffering from such troubles. Apart from this, often bier is used as a medicine in kidney stone disease. So we can say that use of alcohol in specific limit is very helpful for us. It makes us hungry and helps to keep our body fit and healthy.
On the other side, consumption of alcohol beyond certain limit is very harmful to our body. There are so many disadvantages of it. It is directly affect our nervous system and we lose control of ourselves and do not realize what we are doing. Alcohol is the main reason of family conflicts and domestic violence on women. Person not only harms himself but also makes his loved once unhappy and sad. People spent so much money on alcohol and as a result they even do not have money to fulfill their family’s basic requirements. It also directly affects our liver and that may cause many side effects in our body. This is the reason why some states like Gujarat has completely prohibited the alcohol and most of the countries has strict rules on consumption of alcohol.
To summaries, I think that state should implement strict measurement on use of alcohol so that people think twice before crossing the allowable limit.
Many
people
believe that consumption of
alcohol
leads to
many
problems and
as a result
many
states have ban on
alcohol
. Up to certain extent I
agree
with above statement
but
still
government
should
allow
it in certain
limit
as it
also
has
some
advantages too.
First of all
,
alcohol
helps
to
improve
digestive system and doctors
often
suggest it if person is suffering from such troubles. Apart from this,
often
bier is
used
as a medicine in kidney stone disease.
So
we can say that
use
of
alcohol
in specific
limit
is
very
helpful for us. It
makes
us hungry and
helps
to
keep
our body fit and healthy.
On the other side, consumption of
alcohol
beyond certain
limit
is
very
harmful to our body. There are
so
many
disadvantages of it. It is
directly
affect our nervous
system and
we lose control of ourselves and do not realize what we are doing.
Alcohol
is the main reason of family conflicts and domestic violence on women. Person not
only
harms himself
but
also
makes
his
loved
once unhappy and sad.
People
spent
so
much money on
alcohol
and
as a result
they even do not have money to fulfill their family’s basic requirements. It
also
directly
affects our liver and that may cause
many
side effects in our body. This is the reason why
some
states like Gujarat has completely prohibited the
alcohol
and most of the countries has strict
rules
on consumption of alcohol.
To summaries, I
think
that state should implement strict measurement on
use
of
alcohol
so
that
people
think
twice
before
crossing the allowable
limit
.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
13Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes