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Nowadays , traditions and customs are disappearing in many countries . What are the major reasons ? What should the government do to keep our culture alive ?

Nowadays, traditions and customs are disappearing in many countries. What are the major reasons? What should the government do to keep our culture alive? PRA7w
Nowadays traditions and customs are the main indicators of country's history. Government and people should have to preserve them. Despite the development of the world and our transition to modern life, we have to store grooves that is source of our proud. However, many traditions and customs disappering day to day. This essay will examine what should government to prevent disappering of traditions and customs and reasons of this problem.
Nowadays traditions and customs are the main indicators of country's history.
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Government
and
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people
should
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have to
preserve them. Despite the development of the world and our transition to modern life, we
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have to
store grooves
that is
source of our proud.
However
,
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many
traditions and customs
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disappering
day to day. This essay will examine what should
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government
to
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prevent
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disappering
of traditions and customs and reasons of this problem.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, traditions and customs are disappearing in many countries. What are the major reasons? What should the government do to keep our culture alive?

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