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Nowadays, there is more and more plastic disposal which does harm the environment and human's health. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays, there is more and more plastic disposal which does harm the environment and human's health. royp
These days, some people believe that the large amount of plastic that we throw out may cause bad effects to both human and other species' habitat. I totally agree with this point of view. Plastic is a material made to last forever therefore it breaks down into smaller pieces instead of biodegrading. Whenever it falls into pieces, these microplastics may blend into soil and even water then both humans and animals absorb them every day through food and drinking water because of its small size that we cannot see. In addition, plastic contains toxic chemicals that can put human and other species’ health in great danger. For example, some fish are not always able to distinguish between plastic and food, they usually eat plastic because it looks like fish eggs, in result some fish are on the verge of extinction due to plastic. Moreover, most plastic products such as bottles, bags, straws, cups, … are used once then thrown. Besides that, there are the number of people refuse to reuse, reduce and recycle plastic since they think that it is not important, will waste of their time and won’t make any difference. Because of this kind of thought, tonnes of plastic wastes end up in our habitat everyday and may pose a threat to not only our physical condition but also the environment. For instance, millions one time plastic cups and straws are being littered from drinking shops day-to-day instead of washing and reusing. In conclusion, I believe that plastic disposal is an urgent environmental issue which is posing a threat to the entire world and if people do nothing to resolve it, life on Earth will be wiped out soon.
These days,
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people
believe that the large amount of
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plastic
that we throw
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out
may cause
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bad
effects to both human and other species' habitat. I
totally
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agree
with this point of view.

Plastic is a material made to last forever
therefore
it breaks down into smaller pieces
instead
of biodegrading. Whenever it falls into pieces, these microplastics may blend into soil and even water then both humans and animals absorb them every day through food and drinking water
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because
of its
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small
size that we cannot
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see
.
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,
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plastic
contains toxic chemicals that can put human and other species’ health in great
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danger
.
For example
,
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some
fish are not always able to distinguish between
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plastic
and food, they
usually
eat
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plastic
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because
it looks like fish eggs, in result
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some
fish are on the verge of extinction due to plastic.

Moreover
, most
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plastic
products such as bottles, bags, straws, cups, … are
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used
once then thrown.
Besides
that, there are the number of
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people
refuse to reuse,
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reduce
and recycle
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plastic
since they
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think
that it is not
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important
, will waste of their time and won’t
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make
any difference.
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kind of
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thought
, tonnes of
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plastic
wastes
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end
up in our habitat
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everyday
and may pose a threat to not
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only
our physical condition
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but
also
the environment.
For instance
, millions one time
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plastic
cups and straws are
being littered
from drinking shops day-to-day
instead
of washing and reusing.

In conclusion
, I believe that
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plastic
disposal is an urgent environmental issue which is posing a threat to the entire world and if
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people
do nothing to resolve it, life on Earth will
be wiped
out
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soon
.

IELTS essay Nowadays, there is more and more plastic disposal which does harm the environment and human's health.

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281 words
6.0
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