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Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? EPKB
Since communication with others comprises a very essential aspect of our daily life, any alteration in the way we communicate with each other will have a profound effect on our social and professional life. This essay will discuss how technology has influenced the way we relate with each other presently and will then address the question of whether this influence has been positive or negative. There are several ways in which the new communication technology has influenced people’s way of interaction with each other. Firstly, social media applications have revolutionized the way we communicate. The reason why many people believe this is that nowadays, you can connect with your family and friends instantly through many social media applications such as the Facebook and twitter applications. It is also possible to say that people are now more encouraged to share their opinions openly via the Internet. One good illustration for this is the substantial number of friends that people who use social media applications have in their contact list. However, the impact of social media in one’s social life may not always be positive. This is because people are now increasingly abandoning face to face interactions and prefer carrying out their communication behind closed doors. This is causing more people, especially youths, to lose out on many aspects of personal communication. A particularly good example here is a study conducted in the USA showing that more than 75% of high school students are spending more than 50% of their free time on the Internet. In conclusion, modern technological advances in communication have incredibly influenced the way people interact, and although there are many perks associated with the use of recent technology there are also drawbacks that people must take care of.
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with others comprises a
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essential aspect of our daily life, any alteration in the way we communicate with each
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other
will have a profound effect on our
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social
and professional life. This essay will discuss how technology has influenced the way we relate with each
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other
presently
and will then address
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the question of whether
this influence has been
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positive
or
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negative
.

There are several ways in which the new
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communication
technology has influenced
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people’s
way of interaction with each
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other
.
Firstly
,
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social
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media
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applications
have revolutionized the way we communicate. The reason why
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many
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people
believe this is that nowadays, you can connect with your family and friends
instantly
through
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many
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social
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media
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applications
such as the Facebook and twitter
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applications
. It is
also
possible to say that
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people
are
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now
more encouraged to share their opinions
openly
via the Internet. One
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good
illustration for this is the substantial number of friends that
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people
who
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use
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social
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media
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applications
have in their contact list.

However
, the impact of
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social
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media
in one’s
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social
life may not always be
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positive
. This is
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because
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people
are
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now
increasingly
abandoning face to face interactions and prefer carrying out their
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communication
behind closed doors. This is causing more
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people
,
especially
youths, to lose out on
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many
aspects of personal
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communication
. A
particularly
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good
example here is a study conducted in the USA showing that more than 75% of high school students are spending more than 50% of their free time on the Internet.

In conclusion
, modern technological advances in
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communication
have
incredibly
influenced the way
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people
interact, and although there are
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many
perks associated with the
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use
of recent technology there are
also
drawbacks that
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people
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must
take care of.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

Essay
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4 paragraphs
289 words
6.0
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