Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. v.47
Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. v. 47
Everything has two sides, and the ‘effects of technology on people’s relationship’ is not an exception. We cannot deny how much technology transformed the individual reaction with others in his family and the surrounding community.
In my opinion, technology has affected and transformed our life aspects and dealing with other people in a good way. Recently, we have different fast and cheap methods to call our family and friends. Moreover, some technologies are giving us chances to see and talk with them at the same time. In addition, we are informed on a daily basis with the last updates and news about our friends and family, so we can remember the birthdays, graduation parties and even marriage anniversary. Furthermore, these methods make it faster and easier to call and congratulate another individual.
On the other hand, many people believe that technology is affecting individual relationship badly. They opine that, if we did not have these kinds of technology, we would have been visiting each other regularly.
Not only that, but individuals will not be isolated from each other, especially those who are addicted to using social networking platforms. As a matter of fact, people become talking to each other in a face-to-face method rarely. In particular, people’s personalities are changing so much, because of addiction in using Facebook. It’s one of the vital reasons to decrease confidence and self-esteem.
As can be seen, even if we have some bad effects of technology and how it changed the way people contact each other, but we still have much more effects. We can obtain many easy and cheaper methods to contact each other. In fact, technology has enhanced our life and the way we are contacting each other.
Everything has two sides, and the ‘effects of
technology
on
people’s
relationship’ is not an exception. We cannot deny how much
technology
transformed the individual reaction with others in his family and the surrounding community.
In my opinion,
technology
has
affected
and transformed our life aspects and dealing with
other
people
in a
good
way. Recently, we have
different
fast
and
cheap
methods
to call our family and friends.
Moreover
,
some
technologies
are giving us chances to
see
and talk with them at the same time.
In addition
, we
are informed
on a daily basis with the last updates and news about our friends and family,
so
we can remember the birthdays, graduation parties and even
marriage
anniversary.
Furthermore
, these
methods
make
it faster and easier to call and congratulate another individual.
On the
other
hand,
many
people
believe that
technology
is affecting individual relationship
badly
. They opine that, if we did not have these kinds of
technology
, we would have been visiting each
other
regularly
.
Not
only
that,
but
individuals will not
be isolated
from each
other
,
especially
those who
are addicted
to using social networking platforms.
As a matter of fact,
people
become talking to each
other
in a face-to-face
method
rarely
.
In particular
,
people’s
personalities are changing
so
much,
because
of addiction in using Facebook. It’s one of the vital reasons to decrease confidence and self-esteem.
As can be
seen
, even if we have
some
bad
effects of
technology
and how it
changed
the way
people
contact each
other
,
but
we
still
have much more effects. We can obtain
many
easy and cheaper
methods
to contact each
other
. In fact,
technology
has enhanced our life and the way we are contacting each
other
.
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26Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Mistakes