Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Nowadays, the most important task is the protection of the environment for future generations. To what extent do you agree or disagree? v.1

Nowadays, the most important task is the protection of the environment for future generations. v. 1
According to many people, a student must complete his studies as per personal choice. Whereas, others prefer only subjects like, science and technology to be taught in colleges, as these seem beneficial from future prospective. Individuals on both sides have their own reasons behind the particular option. On the one hand, if a child is learning subjects of personal choice, it is quite easy for him to do well. There is no pressure on a kid, he is studying because of self desire. On the other hand, if we will force specific areas of study this will become a headache for many. For instance, if the parents of famous cricketer would have pressured him to study, the world would not have seen fantastic sportsman like him. We are living in a democratic country and have full right to select the occupation. In the coming years, one can achieve good post by other matters. One should not try to snatch the happiness of a student. Whereas, scientific topics are good for a bright future with handsome salary. Lifestyle changes drastically with a better financial position. But, not every child is intellectual enough to understand the depth of the texts, and consequently it would be reflected in low marks. Due to less grades, a child could also go into depression. In conclusion, every individual on this planet has an option to choose a career. If we want our future generations to be happy, we should let them do what they want to do.
According to
many
people
, a student
must
complete his studies as per personal choice. Whereas, others prefer
only
subjects like, science and technology to
be taught
in colleges, as these seem beneficial from future prospective. Individuals on both sides have their
own
reasons behind the particular option.

On the one hand, if a child is learning subjects of personal choice, it is quite easy for him to do well. There is no pressure on a kid, he is studying
because
of self desire.
On the other hand
, if we will force specific areas of study this will become a headache for
many
.
For instance
, if the parents of
famous
cricketer
would have pressured
him to study, the world would not have
seen
fantastic sportsman like him. We are living in a democratic country and have full right to select the occupation. In the coming years, one can achieve
good
post by other matters. One should not try to snatch the happiness of a student.

Whereas, scientific topics are
good
for a bright future with handsome salary. Lifestyle
changes
drastically
with a better financial position.
But
, not every child is intellectual
enough
to understand the depth of the texts, and
consequently
it would
be reflected
in low marks. Due to
less
grades, a child could
also
go into depression.

In conclusion
, every individual on this planet has an option to choose a career. If we want our future generations to be happy, we should
let
them do what they want to do.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
7Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS essay Nowadays, the most important task is the protection of the environment for future generations. v. 1

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
7
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 7.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts