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Nowadays , the majority of students are loosing interst towards their education

Nowadays, the majority of students are loosing interst towards their education DqWEo
Essay. In today's world, there are a lot of factors why some teenegers are loosing interest towards their educational knowledge. I believe that this problem caused more result. On the one hand, the majority of adults do not interested in their education. Nowadays, too many lessons with too much info to obtain. There are lack of resources such as the net and technology. Parents can not buy their children enough technological devices and provide them with good facilities which can guarantee easy learning. Most of the students spend their time on phone and full schedule of a student is the main reason why the majority of students focusing on one particular subject. In addition, adults interest decreased lost day by day. Thus, students face problems further with their grades in different subjects. These reasons lead to negative consequences such as the loss of interest in studying. On the other hand, some steps can be taken to mitigate this situation. This problem caused more result. They spend much effort comparing to studying the various types of subjects. Students study specific subjects which teenegers need mostly. Furthermore, instead of having theory - based lessons a lot of in the classes of educational centre, teachers should organize practical lessons more to make students become interested in one particular subject. Practical lessons take precedence over theoretical lessons. As long as students study specifically, they will not have problems with focus. In conclusion, students may have an opportunity to focus on a specific subjects as long as do not have distractors.
Essay. In
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today
's world, there are
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a lot of
factors why
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some
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teenegers
are loosing interest towards their educational knowledge. I believe that this
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problem
caused more result. On the one hand, the majority of adults do not interested in their education. Nowadays, too
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many
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lessons
with too much info to obtain. There are lack of resources such as the net and technology. Parents can not
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buy
their children
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enough
technological devices and provide them with
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good
facilities which can guarantee easy learning. Most of the
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students
spend their time on phone and full schedule of a
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student
is the main reason why the majority of
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students
focusing on one particular
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subject
.
In addition
, adults interest decreased lost day by day.
Thus
,
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students
face
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problems
further
with their grades in
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different
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subjects
. These reasons lead to
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negative
consequences such as the loss of interest in studying.
On the other hand
,
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some
steps can
be taken
to mitigate this situation. This
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problem
caused more result. They spend much effort comparing to studying the various types of
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subjects
.
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Students
study specific
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subjects
which
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teenegers
need
mostly
.
Furthermore
,
instead
of having theory
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-
based
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lessons
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a lot of
in the classes of educational
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centre
, teachers should organize practical
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lessons
more to
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make
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students
become interested in one particular
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subject
. Practical
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lessons
take precedence over theoretical
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lessons
. As long as
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students
study
specifically
, they will not have
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problems
with focus.
In conclusion
,
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students
may have an opportunity to focus on a specific
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subjects
as long as do not have
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distractors
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the majority of students are loosing interst towards their education

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
256 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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