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Describe a scifi film u have seen

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Sci fi films are my favourite. My most favourite film was avatar it has great graphics and worldbuilding. It is a movie about human invasion onto a planet named pandora. Pandora beings are very long and strongerr than humans so humans wanted a perfect strategical approach for killing them all and capturing the planet. They created a portrait of human in their form and send him in their planet and he started informing what he is learning from them and the ways they can be killed. He learner many skills. In the end war happens between pandora beings and human. Due to support of hero pandora is saved. I love the movie because of great story and amazing graphics.
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Sci fi
films are my
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favourite
. My most
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favourite
film was avatar it has great graphics and
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worldbuilding
. It is a movie about
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human
invasion onto a planet named
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pandora
. Pandora beings are
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very
long and
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strongerr
than
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humans
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so
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humans
wanted a perfect strategical approach for killing them all and capturing the planet. They created a portrait of
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human
in their form and
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send
him in their
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planet and
he
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started
informing what he is learning from them and the ways they can
be killed
.
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He learner
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many
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skills
. In the
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end
war happens between
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pandora
beings and
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human
. Due to support of hero
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pandora
is saved
. I
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love
the movie
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because
of great story and amazing graphics.
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IELTS essay Describe a scifi film u have seen

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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