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Describe a scifi film u have seen

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Sci fi films are my favourite. My most favourite film was avatar it has great graphics and worldbuilding. It is a movie about human invasion onto a planet named pandora. Pandora beings are very long and strongerr than humans so humans wanted a perfect strategical approach for killing them all and capturing the planet. They created a portrait of human in their form and send him in their planet and he started informing what he is learning from them and the ways they can be killed. He learner many skills. In the end war happens between pandora beings and human. Due to support of hero pandora is saved. I love the movie because of great story and amazing graphics.
Sci fi
films are my
favourite
. My most
favourite
film was avatar it has great graphics and
worldbuilding
. It is a movie about
human
invasion onto a planet named
pandora
. Pandora beings are
very
long and
strongerr
than
humans
so
humans
wanted a perfect strategical approach for killing them all and capturing the planet. They created a portrait of
human
in their form and
send
him in their
planet and
he
started
informing what he is learning from them and the ways they can
be killed
.
He learner
many
skills
. In the
end
war happens between
pandora
beings and
human
. Due to support of hero
pandora
is saved
. I
love
the movie
because
of great story and amazing graphics.
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IELTS essay Describe a scifi film u have seen

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