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Nowadays, the advant of technology and the internet has improved way we communicate. Some people assert that online communication has many opportunities, while otherts still choose face-to-face. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, the advant of technology and the internet has improved way we communicate. Some people assert that online communication has many opportunities, while otherts still choose face-to-face. Discuss both views and give your own opinion ORNAM
It is true that we have a miscellaneous ways to communicate with people, get acquire a friends in the modern world. Some people think that online communication one of the up-to-date method to getting acquainted. Others however, believe that face-to-face communication have a more superiority than other methods of to getting acquainted. In further paragraphs, these boyh views will be contrasted and I will give my own opinion for these.
It is true that we have a miscellaneous
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ways
to communicate with
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people
,
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get
acquire
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a friends
in the modern world.
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Some
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people
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think
that online communication one of the up-to-date method to getting acquainted. Others
however
, believe that face-to-face communication have a more superiority than other methods of to getting acquainted. In
further
paragraphs, these
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views will
be contrasted
and I will give my
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own
opinion for these.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, the advant of technology and the internet has improved way we communicate. Some people assert that online communication has many opportunities, while otherts still choose face-to-face. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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  American English
1 paragraphs
70 words
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