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Nowadays , studying is started very early in many schools. What are reasons? What are the effects on quality of education and pupils’ life.

Nowadays, studying is started very early in many schools. What are reasons? What are the effects on quality of education and pupils’ life. 8GpMr
In this day and age, pupils begin to study extremely early in the morning. This essay will highlight focus on early teaching due to thinking in the morning pupils can learn well also quickly and organizing extra more time for other activities as the root causes, which will then be followed by an in-depth analysis of probable repercussions: lack of sleep and possible danger of crashes. The major cause is that many people along with government opine that early education is more useful than other times. To elucidate, since children’s brain relax at night, they may can study well in the morning, which are illustrated in new researches. Consequently, government decide to begin school early. Furthermore, increasing number of parents who desire their children to attend to extra lessons or other activities is another justification of this trend. Particularly, if the more pupils start school early, the more they finish early; therefore they have extra time to go to other interesting activities such as sport or dancing. As for the effects, many pupils cannot sleep enough which is detrimental for their education, especially their health. In other words, getting up early every day is extremely difficult for children, especially primary school pupil. As we know, in the morning streets is busy cars, because in the morning all people go to work. To be more precise, when young pupils are coming to school, they may have accident. To recapitulate briefly, early education is mainly caused by extra time for pupil’s interests and having clear mind in the morning. If this trend continue, children may have large difficulties on education
In this day and age,
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pupils
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begin
to study
extremely
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early
in the
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morning
. This essay will highlight focus on
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early
teaching due to
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thinking
in the
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morning
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pupils
can learn well
also
quickly
and organizing
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extra
more
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time
for
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other
activities as the root causes, which will then
be followed
by an in-depth analysis of probable repercussions: lack of sleep and possible
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danger
of crashes.

The major cause is that
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many
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people
along with
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government
opine that
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early
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education
is more useful than
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other
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times
. To elucidate, since
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children’s
brain relax at night, they
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may can
study well in the
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morning
, which
are illustrated
in new researches.
Consequently
,
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government
decide to
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begin
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school
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early
.
Furthermore
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children
to attend to
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extra
lessons or
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other
activities is another justification of this trend.
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, if the more
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pupils
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start
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school
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early
, the more they finish
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early
;
therefore
they have
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extra
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time
to go to
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other
interesting activities such as sport or dancing.

As for the effects,
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many
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pupils
cannot sleep
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enough
which is detrimental for their
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education
,
especially
their health. In
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other
words, getting up
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early
every day is
extremely
difficult for
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children
,
especially
primary
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school
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pupil
. As we know, in the
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morning
streets is busy cars,
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because
in the
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morning
all
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people
go to work. To be more precise, when young
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pupils
are coming to
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school
, they may have accident.

To recapitulate
briefly
,
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early
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education
is
mainly
caused by
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extra
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time
for
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pupil’s
interests and having
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clear
mind in the
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morning
. If
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this trend continue
,
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children
may have large difficulties on
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education
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IELTS essay Nowadays, studying is started very early in many schools. What are reasons? What are the effects on quality of education and pupils’ life.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
267 words
6.0
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