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Nowadays some individuals behave in an anti-social way. In general, it is the society to blame. What causes the anti-social behaviour of individuals? Who should be responsible for dealing with it?

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IELTS essay Nowadays some individuals behave in an anti-social way. In general, it is the society to blame. What causes the anti-social behaviour of individuals? Who should be responsible for dealing with it?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
87 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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