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Nowadays sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a development?

Nowadays sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a development? e5lNO
The observation have conclude thay taking admission of young learners to preparatory school has gained much popular in this day and age. This trend has merits and demerits when it comes to children. Both the aspects are elaboratd in the ensuing paragraphs with appropriate reasons and suitable examples. Some profitable leverages can be examined of sending off-spring to preparatory academic institution. The utmost profit is that a child becomes disciplined and self dependent. This is to state that boarding school is the place where one gets opportunity to develop overall skills by taking training. For instance, social and leadership traits can be uplifted by taking parts in various programs at the school. On addition to that learner gets a Chance to become academically stronger. The finest education is offered to boarding school and it has a combination of theory as well as practical for particular subjects to make learners academically stronger. However, there is a flip side of sending children to boarding school. The most prominent is that a child may become socially detached. This perspective means that a child may adept solitary life style while in the seminary school and may get isolated from family. On the grounds that from young age a child starts living all alone. Moreover, such schools are way much expensive then domestic private school. On the grounds that from young age, a child,  starts living all alone.  Furthermore, such schools are way much expensive than domestic private school.  Boarding schools much more expensive than any other domestically situated private school because it is an undeniable fact that the cost of living and education both would ne taken to maintain the expenditures at the school. To conclude, it can be eventually stated that momentarily most of the prefer sending their off-springs to boarding school;  yet this fashion has plus and minus points both. Profits which can be derived are  to make the child self-oriented and academically stronger whereas the losses can be evaluated like socially detachment and  expenditures.
The observation have
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conclude
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thay
taking admission of young learners to preparatory
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school
has gained much popular in this day and age. This trend has merits and demerits when it
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comes
to children. Both the aspects are
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elaboratd
in the ensuing paragraphs with appropriate reasons and suitable examples.

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Some
profitable leverages can
be examined
of sending off-spring to preparatory academic institution. The utmost profit is that a
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child
becomes disciplined and self dependent. This is to state that
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boarding
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school
is the place where one
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
gets
opportunity to develop
overall
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skills
by taking training.
For instance
, social and leadership traits can
be uplifted
by taking parts in various programs at the
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school
.
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On
addition to that learner
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gets
a Chance to become
academically
stronger. The finest education
is offered
to
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boarding
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school
and it has a combination of theory
as well
as practical for particular subjects to
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make
learners
academically
stronger.

However
, there is a flip side of sending children to
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boarding
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school
. The most prominent is that a
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child
may become
socially
detached. This perspective means that a
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child
may adept solitary life style while in the seminary
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school
and may
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get
isolated from family. On the grounds that from young age a
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child
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
living all alone.
Moreover
, such
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schools
are way much expensive then domestic private
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school
. On the grounds that from young age, a child,
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
 living all alone.  
Furthermore
, such schools are way much
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expensive
than domestic private school.  Boarding schools much more expensive than any other
domestically
 situated private school
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because
it is an undeniable fact that the cost of living and education both would
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ne
taken to maintain the expenditures at the school.

To conclude
, it can be
eventually
stated that
momentarily
most of
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the prefer
sending their off-springs to
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boarding
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school
;
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yet
this fashion has plus and minus points both. Profits which can 
be derived
 are
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to 
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make
 the child self-oriented and
academically
stronger whereas the losses can 
be evaluated
 like
socially
 detachment and
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expenditures.
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IELTS essay Nowadays sending children to boarding school is becoming increasingly popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a development?

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