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Nowadays robbery and theift are growing problems in many big cities.Give causes and solution?

Nowadays robbery and theift are growing problems in many big cities. Give causes and solution? 3a0dN
In the recent decade the robbery and theft inject enormous problems in urban sectors, at the first sight, the subject seems to have complex causes. However, further analysis shows that they can be neutralized successfully. Thus, this essay will elaborate the reasons and solutions of embezzlement and theft in major cities. The are several causes of robbery, but poverty is the major cause of these crimes. People who have no money to live, they commit robbery and theft of money. To make it more clear, the individuals who are rich will not perform such crime, but on the other hand the persons who are poorer and did not have any source of income despite their a lot of efforts and they have no other choice for live then the will do crimes. To exemplify, it was reported that in the previous decade in which, the people who were involved in crimes mostly belong to poorer families. In addition, unemployment is the second most important cause of robberies. Persons who are unemployed but too much need of money, then they stoles rupees from Banks and rich ones, so that they can fulfil their basic needs of life. To illustrate it, in the recent time, it is reported that the individuals who involved in crimes mostly unemployed. The are a few solutions to reduce crime rate. The first and foremost is to provide employment to every one, because it is the reason of embezzlement. Therefore, if the persons have jobs then they did not need to do any more crime. Admittedly, provide funds to poorer and the government should enforce laws and regulations against professional criminals, and government must provide funds to poorer to fulfil their basic needs of life. In the final analysis, there are numerous causes of robberies and thefts, but we can overtake on these reasons by helping poorer through funds and by employing them.
In the recent decade the
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robbery
and
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theft
inject enormous problems in urban sectors, at the
first
sight, the subject seems to have complex
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causes
.
However
,
further
analysis
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shows
that they can
be neutralized
successfully
.
Thus
, this essay will elaborate the reasons and solutions of embezzlement and
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theft
in major cities.

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several
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causes
of
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robbery
,
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but
poverty is the major
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cause
of these
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crimes
.
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People
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who
have no money to
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live
, they commit
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robbery
and
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theft
of money. To
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make
it more
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clear
, the individuals
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who
are rich will not perform such
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crime
,
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but
on the other hand
the persons
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who
are
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poorer
and did not have any source of income despite
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their
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a lot of
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efforts and
they have no other choice for
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live
then
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the
will do
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crimes
. To exemplify, it
was reported
that in the previous decade in which, the
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people
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who
were involved
in
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crimes
mostly
belong to
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poorer
families.
In addition
, unemployment is the second most
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important
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cause
of
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robberies
. Persons
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who
are unemployed
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but
too much
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need
of money, then
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they stoles
rupees from Banks and rich ones,
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so
that they can fulfil their basic
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needs
of life. To illustrate it, in the recent time, it
is reported
that the individuals
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who
involved in
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crimes
mostly
unemployed.

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The are
a few solutions to
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reduce
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crime
rate. The
first
and foremost is to provide employment to every one,
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because
it is the reason of embezzlement.
Therefore
, if the persons have jobs then they did not
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need
to do any more
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crime
.
Admittedly
, provide funds to
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poorer
and the
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government
should enforce laws and regulations against professional criminals, and
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government
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must
provide funds to
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poorer
to fulfil their basic
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needs
of life.

In the final analysis, there are numerous
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causes
of
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robberies
and
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thefts
,
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but
we can overtake on these reasons by helping
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poorer
through funds and by employing them.
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IELTS essay Nowadays robbery and theift are growing problems in many big cities. Give causes and solution?

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