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genetics or fat issues knakfnalkmfalfa

genetics or fat issues knakfnalkmfalfa mXw2A

we can't accuse the parent for their obese children due to the fact that it maybe the cause of genetics. a lot of the kids in our world suffer from their weight and we complain that their mother and father being lazy and not working on their kids diet or habit of eating. a recent study showed that 45% of the kids nowadays have genetics issues that make them gain fat faster than a normal child would be. and I personally saw that in many of my relatives and friends.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 can't The usual preposition for accusations is "of" not "for." Try it like this:  "accuse the parent of".accuse the parent of
accuse the parent for
 their obese children due to the fact that it maybe the cause of genetics. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
 lot of the kids in our world suffer from their Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).weight, and
weight and
 we complain that their mother and father being lazy and not working on their kids diet or habit of eating. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterA
a
 recent study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
 that 45% of the kids nowadays have genetics issues that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 them gain This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :chubby
fat
 faster than a normal child would be. and I personally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 that in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 of my relatives and friends. 