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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v.4

Food is one of the basic needs for the survival of human beings. Gone are the days when people paid a lot of respect to food and tried to preserve it for as long as possible. In contrast, the new generation of population throws away a lot of eatables which are purchased from shops and restaurants. This essay will examine the causes for the wastage of food and discuss the possible solutions to reduce the amount of food thrown away. Firstly, the main cause for the increasing wastage of food is the increase in the daily wage earnings of people. The prior generations earned very less when compared to that of present generation people. As a result, people are able to buy more food and do not hesistate to throw it in the dustbins. Secondly, public does not give importance to food due to rise in throw -away culture. This is to say, nobody is bothered when other person wastes food. For instance, elder people used to give priority to each and every bite of meal they would have and stop their kids too from wasting the it but, this same practice is not being carried forward to the next generations. Hence, people are carefree to the scenario of food being thrown away. Having discussed about the possible causes, it is important to come out with the solutions for this problem. The first and the basic thing that can be done is creating public awarness. Various campaigns should be started to convey the importance of food. For example, by showing how underprivilaged suffer from malnourishments as they do not have sufficient food to eat. Through this public will start to realize the importance of meals and make sure to buy only the required quantity of food. Another way to lower down the food wastage is by establishing eco-friendly boxes in the restaurants where the excess food is packed, stored and distributed to the poor and the underprivilaged. To conclude, a rise in the earnings and throw-away culture can be regarded as the one of the few reasons for increasing wastage of food. This can lowered by conducting campaigns and the restaurants coming forward for the cause of enlightening people about the importance of food and make sure there is no wastage.
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food
and tried to preserve it for as long as possible.
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eatables which are
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purchased
from shops and restaurants. This essay will examine the
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causes
for the
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wastage
of
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food
and discuss the possible solutions to
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reduce
the amount of
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food
thrown away.

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, the main
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cause
for the increasing
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wastage
of
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food
is the increase in the daily wage earnings of
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people
. The prior generations earned
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less when compared to that of present generation
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people
.
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people
are able to
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buy
more
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food
and do not
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hesistate
to throw it in the dustbins.

Secondly
, public does not give
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importance
to
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food
due to rise in throw -away culture. This is to say, nobody
is bothered
when other person wastes
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food
.
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, elder
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people
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used
to give priority to each and every bite of meal they would have and
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stop
their kids too from wasting
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but
, this same practice is not
being carried
forward to the
next
generations.
Hence
,
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people
are carefree to the scenario of
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food
being thrown
away.

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discussed about the
possible
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, it is
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important
to
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out with the solutions for this problem. The
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be done
is creating public
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awarness
. Various campaigns should be
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started
to convey the
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importance
of
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food
.
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, by showing how
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underprivilaged
suffer from malnourishments as they do not have sufficient
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food
to eat. Through this public will
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start
to realize the
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importance
of meals and
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make
sure to
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buy
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only
the required quantity of
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food
. Another way to lower down the
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food
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wastage
is by establishing eco-friendly boxes in the restaurants where the excess
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food
is packed
, stored and distributed to the poor and the
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underprivilaged
.

To conclude
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be regarded
as the one of the few reasons for increasing
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wastage
of
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food
. This can
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lowered
by conducting campaigns and the restaurants coming forward for the
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cause
of enlightening
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people
about the
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importance
of
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food
and
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make
sure there is no
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wastage
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away?

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