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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v.5

Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 5
These days people do many home parties and go out in the restaurants. They order food in huge quantities and it gets wasted because it is not ordered in limited quantity and neither, they do value the food. It can be managed by having proper estimates and giving the left over food to the needy ones. Firstly, the major reason behind wasting the food is that, while having the get together the actual quantity that needs to ordered is not calculated due to a big group of people. Every individual has different choice which leads to a large amount of food. Also, sometimes, the risk of getting embarrassed in front of the guests results in more quantity than required. Moreover, some individuals do not give importance to food as they get it very easily and do not realize that there are many poor people who struggle to even have one time meal properly. There are many ways in which the wastage of food can be minimized. To start with, it is important for the host to make sure about the choices and take a rough idea of he quantity required beforehand. It will ensure that the food prepared or ordered will be sufficient and would not be thrown away. Furthermore, these items should be prepared which could be used the following day. Finally, instead of throwing the eatables, it could be given to the needy. For instance, in some societies in Gurgaon, the left over food is stored in a common refrigerator which is given to poor people. In conclusion, in present days people waste a lot of food because their inefficiency to ask right amount and their ignorance towards the significance of food. It can be reduced by having accurate idea and by donating the excessive eatables.
These days
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people
do
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many
home parties and go out in the restaurants. They order
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food
in huge
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quantities
and it
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gets
wasted
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because
it is not ordered in limited
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quantity
and neither, they do value the
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food
. It can
be managed
by having proper estimates and giving the
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left
over
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food
to the needy ones.

Firstly
, the major reason behind wasting the
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food
is that, while having the
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get
together the actual
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quantity
that needs to ordered is not calculated due to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
group of
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people
. Every individual has
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different
choice which leads to a large amount of
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food
.
Also
,
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sometimes
, the
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risk
of getting embarrassed in front of the guests results in more
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quantity
than required.
Moreover
,
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some
individuals do not give importance to
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food
as they
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get
it
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very
easily
and do not realize that there are
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many
poor
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people
who struggle to even have one time meal
properly
.

There are
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many
ways in which the wastage of
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food
can
be minimized
. To
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start
with, it is
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important
for the host to
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make
sure about the choices and take a rough
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idea
of
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he
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quantity
required beforehand. It will ensure that the
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food
prepared or ordered will be sufficient and would not
be thrown
away.
Furthermore
, these items should
be prepared
which could be
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used
the following day.
Finally
,
instead
of throwing the eatables, it could be
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given
to the needy.
For instance
, in
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some
societies in Gurgaon, the
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left
over
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food
is stored
in a common refrigerator which is
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given
to poor
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people
.

In conclusion
, in present days
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people
waste
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a lot of
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food
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because
their inefficiency to ask right amount and their ignorance towards the significance of
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food
. It can be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
reduced
by having accurate
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
idea
and by donating the excessive eatables.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
20Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes
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IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 5

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
298 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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