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Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v.10

Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 10
One of the major issues is food wasting all around the world. People throw away plenty of food after their enough consuming without thinking other living organism. I will briefly suggest that some precautions to inhibit this situation. In the modern life, individuals who live in cities can buy whatever they want to eat more than their necessary. Consuming is getting rise rapidly. The reason of this, many advertisements encourage in order to buy new brands, even if also they are same meal. Particularly, the children affect the advertisement. For example, fast food chains sell special menu for kids to add to toys. Thus, the rate of consuming of unnecessarily eating habits is increasing in societies, because of this, most kids can not eat their fast foods. They just want to purchase toys, not important hamburgers or snacks. Following reasons of this, the number of animals is decreased in our cities. In last decades, more people have lived in the villages, therefore animals are fed by residuals. Even more, to buy anything is harder than now, due to consuming habits has restricted compared to now. On the other hand, to suggest any solutions is a significant duty of the governments, and also adults. The governments should be announced that the rate of wasting foodstuff, and economical effects to the communities. For instance, a municipality in my city, give the recycling box to store, and they have utilized tax-free application to return nutrients. This is because, when the people are being more conscious about it, they can take care about residuals. In addition of it, individuals should give residuals to animals where they saved by municipality. In conclusion, I restate that there are many reasons of increasing wasting foods. To solute this issue, the governments should take some precautions, and also educated in society how important of it.
One of the major issues is
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food
wasting all around the world.
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People
throw away
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plenty
of
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food
after their
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enough
consuming without thinking other living organism. I will
briefly
suggest that
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some
precautions to inhibit this situation.

In the modern life, individuals who
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live
in cities can
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buy
whatever they want to eat more than their necessary. Consuming is getting rise
rapidly
. The reason of this,
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many
advertisements encourage in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
new brands, even if
also
they are same meal.
Particularly
, the children affect the advertisement.
For example
,
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fast
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food
chains sell special menu for kids to
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add
to toys.
Thus
, the rate of consuming of
unnecessarily
eating habits is increasing in societies,
because of this
, most kids can not eat their
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fast
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foods
. They
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just
want to
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purchase
toys, not
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important
hamburgers or snacks.

Following reasons of this, the number of animals
is decreased
in our cities. In last decades, more
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people
have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lived
in the villages,
therefore
animals
are fed
by residuals. Even more, to
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buy
anything is harder than
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now
, due to consuming habits has restricted compared to
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now
.
On the other hand
, to suggest any solutions is a significant duty of the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
, and
also
adults. The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
should
be announced
that the rate of wasting foodstuff, and economical effects to the communities.
For instance
, a municipality in my city, give the recycling box to store, and they have utilized tax-free application to return nutrients. This is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
, when the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are being more conscious about it, they can take care about residuals. In
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addition
of it, individuals should give residuals to animals where they saved by municipality.

In conclusion
, I restate that there are
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many
reasons of increasing wasting
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
foods
. To solute this issue, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
governments
should take
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
precautions, and
also
educated in society how
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
of it.
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8Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS essay Nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants. Why do you think people waste food? What can be done to reduce the amount of food they throw away? v. 10

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
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Lexical Resource: 8.0
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Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 8.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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