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Nowadays, People use more cars & others think to use cycle. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, People use more cars & others think to use cycle. keeJR
In upcoming para I will describe the agreement, Nowadays individuals are using more cycles as compared to cars because their are many things as it is eco friendly, anyone can afford that easily and it consumes manpower. As compared to car nowadays fuel is very costly many people cant afford that so they are using public transport nowadays. Secondly cars will have noise & air pollution that is also increasing because of vehicles on road & more traffic. As we could see in this case if we use cycle none of these things will happen. Everything have their advantages & disadvantages like in car the man power is not used as much used if we travel by cycle anywhere. Car saves time, it can also adjust 5 people on the other hand only 2 people can be adjusted on cycle
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the agreement, Nowadays individuals are using more
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eco friendly
, anyone can afford that
easily
and it consumes manpower. As compared to
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car
nowadays fuel is
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very
costly
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people
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afford that
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they are using public transport nowadays.
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cars
will have noise & air pollution
that is
also
increasing
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because
of vehicles on road & more traffic. As we could
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see
in this case
if we
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use
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cycle
none of these things will happen. Everything have their advantages & disadvantages like in
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car
the
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power is not
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used
as much
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if we travel by
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cycle
anywhere.
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Car
saves time, it can
also
adjust 5
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on the other hand
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cycle

IELTS essay Nowadays, People use more cars & others think to use cycle.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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