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Nowadays people use a lot of plastic products freely without treating them properly every where, so it is harmful to human, animals and the living habitats. Write an essay at least 250 words about the problems and solutions to the situation given.

Nowadays people use a lot of plastic products freely without treating them properly every where, so it is harmful to human, animals and the living habitats. Write an essay at least 250 words about the problems and solutions to the situation given. LLx08
Plastic pollution has become a global concern and a crisis that the world has to face as our planet is drowning in plastic litter and microplastics since the industrial revolution. This essay will first indicate that environmental degradation is the biggest issue that stems from the misuse of plastic and then submits actions that must be taken on plastic pollution. The foremost problem caused by using plastics in an uncontrollable way is the accumulation of plastics which negatively affects the natural environment, specifically sea habitat. 73% of beach litter worldwide is plastic. Millions of marine creatures have died as a result of ingesting plastics. Not only the sea environment but also the ground is heavily influenced by plastics pollution. Plastic is hard to dissolve. Once it was thrown into the environment, it could be lasting in the ground for over centuries. And since it is durable, bio-degradability is not found in plastics. In truth, some imperative measures ought to be taken to resolve these serious issues. Practicing the 3R - reduce, reuse, and recycle is strongly recommended. That means we repurpose old plastics to make new products, for instance, melting down the unwanted plastics then make them into new things such as boxes and bags. Also, we reduce the consumption of plastic by using secondhand, environmentally friendly products and avoid plastic packaging. Moreover, education is an important thing that has to be operated to solve the prospective problems of plastics pollution. To conclude what has been stated so far, environmental pollution caused by plastics and its consequence is a challenging circumstance, but it’s possible to solve by some suggestions above. In foreseeable future, more and more nations will take the ability on taking action on plastics pollution.
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Plastic
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pollution
has become a global concern and a crisis that the world
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has to
face as our planet is drowning in
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plastic
litter and microplastics since the industrial revolution. This essay will
first
indicate that environmental degradation is the biggest issue that stems from the misuse of
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plastic
and then submits actions that
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must
be taken
on
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plastic
pollution.

The foremost problem caused by using
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plastics
Consider replacing "in an uncontrollable way" with the adverb for "uncontrollable"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in an uncontrollable way
is the accumulation of
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plastics
which
negatively
affects the natural environment,
specifically
sea habitat. 73% of beach litter worldwide is
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plastic
. Millions of marine creatures have
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died
as a result
of ingesting
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plastics
. Not
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only
the sea environment
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but
also
the ground is
heavily
influenced by
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plastics
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pollution
.
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Plastic
is
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hard
to dissolve. Once it
was thrown
into the environment, it could be lasting in the ground for over centuries. And since it is durable,
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bio-degradability
is not found in plastics.

In truth,
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some
imperative measures ought to
be taken
to resolve these serious issues. Practicing the 3R
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
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reduce
, reuse, and recycle is
strongly
recommended. That means we repurpose
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old
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plastics
to
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make
new products,
for instance
, melting down the unwanted
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plastics
then
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make
them into new things such as boxes and bags.
Also
, we
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reduce
the consumption of
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plastic
by using secondhand,
environmentally
friendly products and avoid
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plastic
packaging.
Moreover
, education is an
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important
thing that
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has to
be operated
to solve the prospective problems of plastics

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pollution
.

To conclude
what has
been stated
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so
far, environmental
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pollution
caused by
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plastics
and its consequence is a challenging circumstance,
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but
it’s possible to solve by
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some
suggestions above. In foreseeable future, more and more nations will take the ability on taking action on
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plastics
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
pollution
.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people use a lot of plastic products freely without treating them properly every where, so it is harmful to human, animals and the living habitats. Write an essay at least 250 words about the problems and solutions to the situation given.

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
287 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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