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The infographic shows general choices of vehicle among youngsters in different countries. As is observed, cars are the most popular means of transportation for teenagers and young adults to commute between places. Besides, demands for motorcycles and bicycles vary in different countries. To start with, two thirds of young people living in Great Britain are in favour of cars, which is also the situation reported in the USA. This figure doubles the number of young motorcyclists and is overwhelmingly six times higher than the number of bicyclists in Great Britain. Meanwhile, there is a completely contrasting pattern seen in the USA. Regarding France, a vast majority of young people are hooked on driving cars, which accounts for above 70 percent in total. In contrast, the number of car-lovers merely makes up two fifths of the total in Germany while bicycles become the most popular vehicle in this country.
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general choices of vehicle among youngsters in
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teenagers
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adults to commute between places.
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different
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favour
of cars, which is
also
the situation reported in the USA. This figure doubles the number of
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young
motorcyclists and is
overwhelmingly
six times higher than the number of bicyclists in Great Britain. Meanwhile, there is a completely contrasting pattern
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seen
in the USA.

Regarding France, a vast majority of
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up two fifths of the total in Germany while bicycles become the most popular vehicle in this country.
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IELTS essay ksmcnjkajscnksaskjnajdnajndjanijdnaijvnsa

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