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In global Era shopping trend increase day by day. Today few folk like to shop at modern market rather than traditional market. This essay Will discard The statement as in modern marketing more Varieties of items and branded goodsThe first ground to support My agreement Is that in showroom and mAlls Item are available as compare to traditional market. Moreover, People buy there are more Easy and quickly. Many shopping malls open to see the Popularity include for shoppingIn addition, Moden market are provide branded items. Example Nike, Adidas and gucce Their clothes are very popular. However, people like to wear branded clothes some too showoff And some like there ProductsTo recapitulate, it can be concluded that due to modernisation there were a money thing Modern search shopping method also change people now going Modern marketing or shopping because there are different Branded items and a large validity available
In global Era
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shopping
trend increase day by day.
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Today
few folk like to shop at
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modern
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market
rather
than traditional
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market
. This essay Will discard The statement as in
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modern
marketing more Varieties of
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items
and
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branded
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goodsThe
first
ground to support My agreement Is that in showroom and
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mAlls
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Item
are available as compare to traditional
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market
.
Moreover
,
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People
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buy
there are more
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and
quickly
.
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Many
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shopping
malls open to
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see
the Popularity include for
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shoppingIn
addition,
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Moden
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market
are
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provide
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branded
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items
. Example Nike, Adidas and
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gucce
Their clothes are
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very
popular.
However
,
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people
like to wear
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branded
clothes
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some
too showoff And
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some
like there
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ProductsTo
recapitulate, it can
be concluded
that due to
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modernisation
there were a money thing
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Modern
search
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shopping
method
also
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change
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people
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now
going
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Modern
marketing or
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shopping
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because
there are
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different
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Branded
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IELTS essay Nowadays people prefer to shop at modern marketing rather than a traditional to

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
148 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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