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Nowadays people prefer to live

Nowadays people prefer to live Kn7Q6
It is indeed fact that, innovation technology has been affecting human's life in a creation mode. In this contemporary epoch, thanks to technology innovations, such as internet, wireless telepathy and faster train that all are help of people to live and work from any part of the globe. I this following paragraphs, I will discuss the advantages outweigh than disadvantages. To commence with, in this modern time technology has made on image and space in human mind. Primarily, it assist to save precious time. Not only, individuals can work from any part of the work but also, they can able to work with those international companies that far away from their our country. To elaborate more, masses not only, rise up their communication skills also, people can increase their oversea experience as well. Another advantage in my mind is, technology helps of decline the ratio of migration from country side to urban area. Because with the advanced technological features rural people work from their house and they do not need to move in cities for employment.
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indeed
fact that, innovation
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technology
has been affecting human's life in a creation mode. In this contemporary epoch, thanks to
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technology
innovations, such as internet, wireless telepathy and faster train that all are
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help
of
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people
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live
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work
from any part of the globe.
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this following paragraphs, I will discuss the advantages outweigh than disadvantages. To commence with, in this modern time
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technology
has made on image and space in human mind.
Primarily
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assist
to save precious time. Not
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, individuals can
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work
from any part of the
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also
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can able to
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work
with those international
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companies
that far away from their our country. To elaborate more, masses not
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only
, rise up their communication
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skills
also
,
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people
can increase their oversea experience
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. Another advantage in my mind is,
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technology
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helps
of decline the ratio of migration from country side to urban area.
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with the advanced technological features rural
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people
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house and
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IELTS essay Nowadays people prefer to live

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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