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Nowadays people move to urban area far away from rural area. What are cause and effect.

Nowadays people move to urban area far away from rural area. What are cause and effect. XlJBq
Undeniably, metropolitan and cosmopolitan cities have state of art facilities in the present scenario. Rural area are being moved by individuals in many nations from countryside area. Instead of letting, it spread further. It has some reasons and effects. To initiate with the ignite spark to make the situation worse the top most cause of it that people are migrating from village not only academically but also personally as well as professionally. To explain it, there have a lot of facilities about study such as high standard school and better tuitions. In this way, dwellers get great education. Moreover, numerous type of entertainment sources also present due to tired mind are rejuvenated by people from the monotonous of the hectic schedule. They are visited cinema, shopping center and other places. If talking about the business then they can get jobs opportunities. For example, in India, 70% villagers migrate from countryside area towards town. It has some adverse effects that population are increased in cities by it. If people are moved than it put effect on the economy of the nation because the number of declined who do work in agriculture field that is why the hinder of progress of country. Furthermore, pollution are also inclined of cities due to the over population. It is bad approach for society as well state also. After pondering a great deal of thoughts i come to conclusions that it must be remembered that excess of everything is bad. Jobs should be provided by government in village. Authorities had better give facilities in rural area in order to mitigate this problem.
Undeniably
, metropolitan and cosmopolitan cities have
state of art
facilities in the present scenario. Rural
area
are being
moved
by individuals in
many
nations from countryside
area
.
Instead
of letting, it spread
further
. It has
some
reasons and effects. To initiate with
the ignite
spark to
make
the situation worse the top most cause of it that
people
are migrating from village not
only
academically
but
also
personally
as well
as
professionally
. To
explain
it, there have
a lot of
facilities about study such as high standard school and better
tuitions
. In this way, dwellers
get
great education.
Moreover
, numerous type of entertainment sources
also
present due to tired mind
are rejuvenated
by
people
from
the monotonous of
the hectic schedule. They
are visited
cinema, shopping center and other places. If talking about the business then they can
get
jobs opportunities.
For example
, in India, 70% villagers migrate from countryside
area
towards town. It has
some
adverse effects that population
are increased
in cities by it. If
people
are
moved
than it put effect on the economy of the nation
because
the number of declined who do work in agriculture field
that is
why the
hinder
of progress of country.
Furthermore
, pollution are
also
inclined of cities due to the over population. It is
bad
approach for society
as well
state
also
.
After
pondering a great deal of thoughts
i
come
to conclusions that it
must
be remembered
that excess of everything is
bad
. Jobs should
be provided
by
government
in village. Authorities had better give facilities in rural
area
in order to mitigate this problem.
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IELTS essay Nowadays people move to urban area far away from rural area. What are cause and effect.

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